What is Alfie's endgame in being such a huge cunt
Like what does she want her mother to capitulate on that she hasn't already ? She pretty much just waved a white flag and accepted everything.
I really don't understand, any normal person would have just burried the hatchet right then and there, what is the point of any of this
Like anon above said this might be leading Alfie actually breaking down and admitting everything has done wrong. Though the build has been weird like Incase wasn't sure how to handle the scene because multiple times it seemed like Alfie was passed this. She relented when Vera started walking away, she seemed to empathize after Vera told her Derek is gay and has been cheating on her for the entirety of their marriage, and she pulled this face when Rug was insulting Vera. Yet every other page she is back to escalating things.
The stealing bit wasn't an act, she couldn't have planned it to fuck with Vera because she hadn't been with Rug when she saw them. So she was definitely helping them plan crimes without precedence of making mom mad.
I dunno, her portraying is inconsistent
She seems both afraid of confrontation and constantly escalating things, those things don't make sense together
Alfie still hasnt given up on her casual whore persona shes built for herself, its pretty much all she has left since shes burned almost every bridge and is essentially a homeless vagrant at this point. Im sure the goblins are going to inadvertently force her to confront some of the ugly truths of this life she claims to want. Her primary reason for doing all this has already come unraveled, its only a mater of time before her last shell comes off.
That would describe the action of a few women in real life I know. Including my youngest sister that jumped between "no one loves me, no one like me" and "I will fuck everything".
>What is Alfie's endgame in being such a huge cunt
Endgame?
But seriously it's obvious that there is no actual endgame she's just lashing out, pure in the moment tantrum shit
Oh my god, just slap this narcissistic little bitch already!
Incase, I know you read these comments, so just let me say that if your goal with Alfie was or create a complex yet compelling mc with flaws and personality quirks, yet still endearing to the reader:
you have failed MISERABLY!
I eagerly look forward to final chapter of this slog of a webcomic so that I never have to read, think, or talk about this hateful little she-troll again.
If you want to salvage this narrative disaster, end the story with Vera telling Alfie to fuck off and have the last pages all about her and Cillian unsure of where their further will take them but confident that they will be able to face it together and end it with a sweet love scene, with the final panel implying that she may be pregnant with his child.
Fuck Alfie and her narcissistic coming of age story.
Who the hell wants to read a comic about a literal slut with parental issues going thru the whole 'running away because her parents told her not to be a skank, becoming a skank, dying her hair and then coming back to prove how much better she is doing now' routine that we see in real life everyday anyway, born from nothing more than a subpar porn comic
I swear im not a misogynist but the way she is acting is spot on irresponsible early 20s female. It's frustrating to read because when you have a sound mind and lots of time you can easily see how badly she is fucking herself over but the thing is I've seen women do this IRL. She left home because she was angry at her mom, her spite drives her to want the satisfaction of seeing her mother lash out at her. so even though she just lost her original logical reason to fight she still can't let go of her emotions and is childishly trying to goad her mom. I've seen 24 year old girl mad at their parents mess up their lives dropping out of school, joining gangs, fucking anyone that will anger mom n pa. You can see this to a lesser extent with most women in general, they want emotional validation and aren't realy asking if they look fat. What they're really asking is for you to validate their feelings of looking fat. When you don't and they aren't emotionally mature about it there will be a fight.
My youngest sister did this in 3 years. Got hitched to a great hard working guy, got pregnant, got divorced, went on an "hot girls summer"/"only fans" phase, which ended with pregnancy with God knows who and claiming that ALL of this was the foult of her husband, who "didn't have enough time for her". And it is a dude who not only takes care of both her kids, but who took and PAID for her surgery when she got injured filming one of her sceens. Ah and in that 3 years, she also managed to spend all the money my grandfather left for her, which was enough to pay for 12 trimesters of good med school.
in the most charitable interpretation this is just Alfie being completely honest about what shes been doing in an effort to match how honest her mother was about her marriage. Thats really hard to maintain though if shes going to start flirting with whats essentially her unofficial step dad. Of course anyone with two brain cells to rub together could tell Alfie that the path shes on leads nowhere good, hopefully a corrective backhand from Vera can set her straight.
If this comic took itself a little less serious Vera and Cillian would have sexually dominated her as soon as she pulled that wink
Butt then we would miss the kino scene of Alfie breaking down.
What is Alfie's endgame in being such a huge cunt
Like what does she want her mother to capitulate on that she hasn't already ? She pretty much just waved a white flag and accepted everything.
I really don't understand, any normal person would have just burried the hatchet right then and there, what is the point of any of this
Alfie is afraid of talking.
Afraid of talking how ?
She can't seem to shut the fuck up here
Of feefees. She ran away from all of her flings.
Like anon above said this might be leading Alfie actually breaking down and admitting everything has done wrong. Though the build has been weird like Incase wasn't sure how to handle the scene because multiple times it seemed like Alfie was passed this. She relented when Vera started walking away, she seemed to empathize after Vera told her Derek is gay and has been cheating on her for the entirety of their marriage, and she pulled this face when Rug was insulting Vera. Yet every other page she is back to escalating things.
The stealing bit wasn't an act, she couldn't have planned it to fuck with Vera because she hadn't been with Rug when she saw them. So she was definitely helping them plan crimes without precedence of making mom mad.
I dunno, her portraying is inconsistent
She seems both afraid of confrontation and constantly escalating things, those things don't make sense together
The escalation is so that the other party storms off in rage instead of trying to talk things out with her.
I don't buy it, they were having a heart to heart like 10 seconds ago
goddamn halflings have some bigass titties in this universe
They're called halflings because half their body mass ends up in the chest.
Alfie still hasnt given up on her casual whore persona shes built for herself, its pretty much all she has left since shes burned almost every bridge and is essentially a homeless vagrant at this point. Im sure the goblins are going to inadvertently force her to confront some of the ugly truths of this life she claims to want. Her primary reason for doing all this has already come unraveled, its only a mater of time before her last shell comes off.
That would describe the action of a few women in real life I know. Including my youngest sister that jumped between "no one loves me, no one like me" and "I will fuck everything".
> She seems both afraid of confrontation and constantly escalating things, those things don't make sense together
Simple anon. She's a woman.
>thinking Alfie has an endgame
she's an immature cunt acting out - there is no plan, no endgame
Alfie is just a retard. Maybe she wants to get her mom to lash back so she is on more familiar ground
She's just laying it all out on the table like Vera did. Alfie IS a huge cunt/dumbass and telling Vera what she has been up to
It's called self-loathing and she wants Vera to hope on the ride.
>What is Alfie's endgame in being such a huge cunt
Endgame?
But seriously it's obvious that there is no actual endgame she's just lashing out, pure in the moment tantrum shit
Oh my god, just slap this narcissistic little bitch already!
Incase, I know you read these comments, so just let me say that if your goal with Alfie was or create a complex yet compelling mc with flaws and personality quirks, yet still endearing to the reader:
you have failed MISERABLY!
I eagerly look forward to final chapter of this slog of a webcomic so that I never have to read, think, or talk about this hateful little she-troll again.
If you want to salvage this narrative disaster, end the story with Vera telling Alfie to fuck off and have the last pages all about her and Cillian unsure of where their further will take them but confident that they will be able to face it together and end it with a sweet love scene, with the final panel implying that she may be pregnant with his child.
Fuck Alfie and her narcissistic coming of age story.
Who the hell wants to read a comic about a literal slut with parental issues going thru the whole 'running away because her parents told her not to be a skank, becoming a skank, dying her hair and then coming back to prove how much better she is doing now' routine that we see in real life everyday anyway, born from nothing more than a subpar porn comic
>then coming back to prove how much better she is doing now
This is the only part you were wrong about.
I swear im not a misogynist but the way she is acting is spot on irresponsible early 20s female. It's frustrating to read because when you have a sound mind and lots of time you can easily see how badly she is fucking herself over but the thing is I've seen women do this IRL. She left home because she was angry at her mom, her spite drives her to want the satisfaction of seeing her mother lash out at her. so even though she just lost her original logical reason to fight she still can't let go of her emotions and is childishly trying to goad her mom. I've seen 24 year old girl mad at their parents mess up their lives dropping out of school, joining gangs, fucking anyone that will anger mom n pa. You can see this to a lesser extent with most women in general, they want emotional validation and aren't realy asking if they look fat. What they're really asking is for you to validate their feelings of looking fat. When you don't and they aren't emotionally mature about it there will be a fight.
My youngest sister did this in 3 years. Got hitched to a great hard working guy, got pregnant, got divorced, went on an "hot girls summer"/"only fans" phase, which ended with pregnancy with God knows who and claiming that ALL of this was the foult of her husband, who "didn't have enough time for her". And it is a dude who not only takes care of both her kids, but who took and PAID for her surgery when she got injured filming one of her sceens. Ah and in that 3 years, she also managed to spend all the money my grandfather left for her, which was enough to pay for 12 trimesters of good med school.
I feel sorry for Alfie. I wonder if this will conclude with her just going back home. This is all too much for a village girl.
in the most charitable interpretation this is just Alfie being completely honest about what shes been doing in an effort to match how honest her mother was about her marriage. Thats really hard to maintain though if shes going to start flirting with whats essentially her unofficial step dad. Of course anyone with two brain cells to rub together could tell Alfie that the path shes on leads nowhere good, hopefully a corrective backhand from Vera can set her straight.