Who else likes writing darker, more mature and profound fanfics of their favorite TV shows?
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Who else likes writing darker, more mature and profound fanfics of their favorite TV shows?
Sounds like bad bait but eh
I think every edgy teen that ever put fingers to keys went through that phase
I'm 23 and still in it.
At 23 you're basically still an edgy teen.
How?
You'll understand one day.
You may be right, but I'd like to propose something in kind.
Youth and naivete might go hand in hand, but it's a more emotional place than when someone has "Been there and done that" because you can't quite shake it. Entropy has this nasty habit of taking things away like that.
It's like that prayer from the Tarkovsky movie Stalker, that an old tree is like death's companion. It's hard. It doesn't bend, but breaks. A sapling is soft, but it's pliant. It bends. It reaches. An older tree settles ever closer to the ground under it's own weight.
You still need experience, but experience is not the sole property of old age. Hurricanes still happen. Forest fires.
The 13th doctor is the worst doctor but I don’t blame you for writing rape fics about her.
For real, though, it just sort of becomes inevitable. The original material dances around the darker topics while still referencing them, so it's easy pickings for someone wanting to build on the source. It's the same for romance.
Spider-Man has
>grown up without his parents
>got molested by his babysitter
>learned his father figure died because of a stupid mistake he made
>ran away crying because he didn't think he because he didn't beat his first supervillain
>had his infant daughter, clone brother, and his girlfriend murdered by his worst enemy
>his best friend became his worst enemy and tried to kill hum
>sold his soul to the devil
>buried alive
>turned into a Spider-Mutant Monsrer
>tortured psychologically by his arch enemy to make him think he was his son
>has his body stolen by his other worst enemy
>died in the body of his other worst enemy
>had his life stolen by other worst enemy
>had his soul and identity obliterated by his other worst enemy
>tormented by a pair of zombie clones of a fictious rape baby between his former girlfriend and her murderer
>killed repeatedly by them
>all of his Marvel Zombies appearances
And worst of all
>written by Dan Slott
Like Spidey is hard to beat in shitty lives. Anything you will feel unnecessary and superfluous for Spidey in edge.
>got molested by his babysitter
I’m sorry what?
Reminder, Mods sometimes look the other way so long as you don't shill your own shit, save that for the MLP thread
You don't know about Chip? Oh boy
ENTER SKIP WESCOT (he's 16 despite being white haired
Jesus, I didn't expect something like that. When was this written
1984, Power Pack being a like child safety PSA.
I dread even imagining explaining vore to them and then thinking there's bestial cannibal fetishists. Fricking agony being a degen, I need a degenerate irl so I can pretend I'm not a brain broken freak instead of being terminally online
I'm the same as you. It's hard being into things that are not socially acceptable. I'm not really a "degen" so to speak, but I like things like bara as a woman, and it's really hard to find other women who also like bara.
Yeah, at least he wasn't 61.
I think you're forgetting a couple of more things about the spoderman cannon
It's funny that they're both owned by Disney now, but Elsa gate was pretty disgusting. I hate these autogenerated like kids videos
You’ll notice it’s effects in 6-10 years.
I try to forget Elsagate exists, mental illness moment.
So, are you gonna post your favorite Spider-man fanfics, or not?
>sold his soul to the devil
It was his marriage, not his soul
>tormented by a pair of zombie clones of a fictious rape baby between his former girlfriend and her murderer
The Kindred saga is incomprehensible, but those twins were never rape babies.
>oh this line's giving me trouble maybe tomorrow I'll resume writing
>last updated 8 months ago
It's crazy how fast time flies when you try and write for fun.
i know how you feel i was supposed to be proofreading and HTMLing my fanfic to upload it to ao3 and the month autodelete deadline already came and went so i had to back it up on my drive and try again another time why am i so lazy
Have you tried getting pissed off?
Like, not ashamed or guilt ridden, but mad?
Because I could tell you to try daily, maybe even write daily, but you're a little bit past that.
And guilt is the exact opposite of a motivator.
You need to get angry.
If not at your own work then at someone else's.
Thanks, homosexuals. Gonna give my /a/ fanfic another go. What shit holds you up? For me it's my autistic focus on details and impact. It's not enough to run on assumptions - I have to make maps and timetable character activities. It's not enough to have an emotional scene, each word needs to hit like a tank. It's paralysing.
That's why most blogs tell you to keep it simple and let the reader do the heavy lifting. No wonder you got suckered into making things so dramatic.
>"weebshit" anon replied
Vs
>"weebshit!" Shouted Anon at the top of his lungs, slamming send on his post, text dripping with contempt
The top is better because it cuts the bullshit. You can tell how the first sounds while the second holds your hand like a child. Also I'd sooner go to trash's writegays for advice
I don't mind the second one. Brevity is only objectively necessary when you're telling jokes. Nothing makes something unfunnier than overexplaining the punchline.
Brevity applies to emotional scenes.
Shit example. Repetitive as frick.
>It covered my skin as I ran. Fur caught on fabric with every step, crawling up my neck. It smothered me."
Could condense it even better.
>Fur smothered me as I ran. It caught on the fabric, growing thicker with each step."
And so on. You're an idiot using a water metaphor for fur anyway.
>Fur smothered me as I ran. It caught on the fabric, growing thicker with each step."
Lifeless. Reading it, she might as well be describing the weather.
>You're an idiot using a water metaphor for fur anyway.
See
, the water metaphor is apt because the fur is aggressively flowing up her body. She is "drowning" because she feels helpless against this wave of change.
I think both examples are shit. The first has no emotional impact and the second is over-done. I'm too lazy to dig up one of my better non-/mlp/ lines, so have a random from what I'm working on.
>As I ran, I could feel it covering my skin. The- my fur catching on the fabric of my clothes with every step. I could feel it crawling up my neck, like I was drowning just trying to tread water.
Not the punchiest, but notice how the flow of words has a slight stumbling, panicked feel to it that matches the situation.
>that example
Anon...
That is exactly the reaction I'm trying to evoke in this scene. It is The Metamorphosis but with furries.
>It is The Metamorphosis but with furries.
>uses a meme to mock repetitive and unoriginal things
>the meme becomes stale and repetitive
Ironic.
No need to get butthurt over a mild criticism, if you're going to write trash fetishes in a raped to death genre then don't be an insecure moronic pseud about it. I find it very funny you assumed your epic writing skills evoked my disgust as opposed to the inherent implications of transformation yiff.
>pseudposting already
This is why no one should ever get writing (or drawing) advice from Cinemaphile
Crabs everywhere
I didn't write it moron, I just hate how memes on Cinemaphile, YouTube and Twitter are all homogenous. The death of individual web cultures for a generalized thing is the death of fun.
tbh imma be real, I'm a homie into shit like changed for TF or weight gain but I'm totally into weird nightmare horror.
>changed
There is a disturbing amount of little kids into that shit. Like 7-10 year olds.
There's nothing like sexually explicit but like it is kinda weird how kids are seeing a fricking latex furry tf/furry tf game. Like do their parents not watch them?
Boomers don't know what fetishes are beyond normie shit like BDSM. Imagine trying to explain diapers or inflation to them. Also while there's nothing sexually explicit in the game, I heard the creator has been drawing nothing but grotesque wiener vore for a while now. His pages are just a google search away for any 10 year old.
Lol, that wasn't me.
>if you're going to write trash fetishes
It's a prequel to BNA exploring Michiru's year in solitude and journey to Animacity after catching furryAIDS. TF really isn't my fetish, but body horror and alienation are.
>raped to death genre
See
. TF is raped, but where are you getting these Metamorphosis/Kafkaesque stories from?
>I find it very funny you assumed your epic writing skills evoked my disgust as opposed to the inherent implications of transformation yiff.
I was deliberately missing the point to make a shitty joke and bump the thread. Take your autism meds.
Is that what he meant by that? I wasn't aware that this is a tired trope. Most of the TF stories I find are wish fulfilment, and in the rare case they aren't, they don't have a meaningful hikki arc full of despair. Please, point me to these stories. Suffering, despair, & body horror is my fetish but trannies have ruined it.
Fanfics aren't comics or cartoons, they aren't even movies which get a pass somehow, puppets or illustrated books
They don't belong on Cinemaphile
But they're often based on comics and cartoons.
So are my wanks but I don't post my cum here
>muh pure Cinemaphile
No one cares, be thankful they haven't deleted this board and splitting it into Cinemaphile and Cinemaphile.
Frick off you wannabe-janny
I remember being a really good writer when I was younger but I lost interest. Last thing I remember writing was a short story back when I was 16
Fetishgays are, and have always been, the degenerate cancer killing fanfiction and dragging its name through the mud. I can't be the only one who just writes wholesome fluff?
I can do both. I enjoy lewd and fluff.
i write terrible fetishes and cannot be stopped
I only write fetish for wholesome fandoms. I like degrading pure characters.
>accuses others of killing fanfiction
>writes fluff
Depends on the fetish. Unless it's Dipper Goes to Taco Bell or Cupcakes tier, it doesn't phase me
It's one way to deal with work anger/frustration. Last shit I wrote hit guro territory.
>can't be the only one who just writes wholesome fluff?
So do I but violence and fricking is more gratifying in the long run
The pinnacle of fanfiction is to write in the tradition of the source material: crazy fetish shit that flies under the radar. There is no truer path.
I can't handle fluff. I'm ok with romance as an element but straight fluff is a bit much for me. I like action/adventure and stuff that really gets into characters' heads.
as they say, sex sells
I thought about making an AU of Owl House in the Twisted Metal: Black universe.
That actually sounds like a great idea.
Like Gus being in the asylum for several grisly crimes he committed to help his father become a better journalist, the whole illusionist part comes from just how well planned out these crimes are for his father to find, until a little slip up ends up unraveling the whole thing and he's arrested. His Twisted Metal: Black brand of crazy pulling in his original interest in humanity from a more morbid standpoint as people always love a good story, preferring to create bad news as everything being all sunshine and rainbows make for a terrible newsday.
Luz being the Marcus Kane "Normal" one in the menagerie of freaks and very close to her beta concept counterpart.
You should totally go for it Anon.
Thanks, I’ve actually thought about quite a few ideas
>takes place on Earth, but more grim and fantastical
>Belos is the Calypso, with his powers being drawn from Collector
>Eda and Lilith are nurses at Blackfield and the only survivors of the massacre
>Luz is the most sane but only by comparison, she became depressed after her girlfriend Amity was murdered and wants revenge
>Hunter was the child of cult members who died in a mass suicide, not sure what his wish would be
>King is a man who believes himself to have lycanthropy who wishes it to be cured and refuses to let anyone take off his cow skull mask
>the three are the closet thing the patients have to friends, which comes into conflict during the tournament
>Vee is John Doe, who is amnesiac and trying to find her identity
>Kikimora is a woman with a Napoleonic Complex whose wishes to join Belos
>Steve is Mr. Grimm but an Iraq War vet instead of Vietnam
>Bill is a combo of Needles and an evil Preacher; he was an egotistical preacher in a small town who killed King’s clan, was punished by divine intervention, and instead of redeeming himself, he turned his back on God and became the depraved leader of a sadistic Satanic cult who desires to kill King
>Tarek is Axel who is trying to find his wife’s killer
>Boscha is a former bully who gained a “third eye” making her violently schizophrenic
>Hooty is Black/Manslaughter and Warden is Minion
I really wanna see Hooty as a Car now
YOU'LL LEARN THAT YOUR ACTIONS HAVE CONSEQUENCES HOOT HOOT
Been working at my first story for Six (6) Years.
It is fanfiction, but I've always had all these ideas, original and "Here's how I'd write and direct the movie for Ace Combat 5", but if it wasn't for this one movie I needed, I may have never written a damn thing at all.
So at first, I owed it my most honest and genuine engagement of it's setting, the culture, all of it, I went headlong and haven't stopped...
...
If that was it, then I would've stopped 3 years ago, and not spent the last 3 rewriting it and editing it.
But I have been, because while writing for someone's movie, I kinda made up my own in the process.
I was always telling myself "If I can finish this one thing, truly accomplish it, that's it then, I'll have proof and confirmation that is so real and inarguable, I can go forth and do whatever, I can even be a crazy piece of shit that walks up to some studio and throw it at them like it counts as a resume and I won't even feel stupid.", you know, like a bastard,
But it's gone deeper than that, now.
I write to music, my mind needs a soundtrack or I'm just not there... So I've actually had to, on several occasions, make up an edit or break down clips of songs into stems, edit them, more or less mash samples together like I'm Kids & Explosions,
and in the process of following that routine to the point that I actually make music for a fanfic,
I made characters, I made people up, and now I owe it to them, too, a little.
I made up my own world full of people that deserve the closest thing to perfection that I can give them.
And, yeah, this kind of loops back to me, but it also loops back to anyone writing anything, maybe.
Even fanfiction.
Whatever you're doing, don't half ass it, don't make it up, don't frick around, just send it. Send it like Vincent Van Gogh or Kanye West or George Lucas.
Throw yourself into and get fricking lost in it.
Getting around to knowing what the hell you're even trying to do comes after.
Mindy Kaling, apparently.
For the past few years I've been writing a lengthy novel about The Batman Who Laughs crossing over into the real world and taking an elementary school hostage after killing every adult in the building, and he uses the building as his base of operations while he builds technology and infiltrates governments in order to take over the world, and the entire story is from the perspective of the elementary schoolers. The whole thing is a metaphor for childhood trauma, psychological development, and the effect of media on the youth.
That sounds pretty good, is it uploaded yet?
No, but if I ever do I'll be sure to shill it here.
Cool, I’d definitely check it out.
I'm not an autist, so not me.
I’ve legit been thinking of doing a Green Lantern/Captain Marvel crossover fanfic.
Why? Hal and Billy have met tons of times before.
Does it count if the original comic run was darker than the TV series?
I want to write some where sassy cartoon girls get traumatized, but never got around to start.
Never written them down, but sometimes I think about the world outside the source material. How mundane would it be to have Superman fly past your office to fight another supervillain for the 500th time