Easy he gets a job to build a new war machine but needs to prove its battle ready and keeps fricking it up. Finale ends with him trying to take down the company that hired him with his “failed” designs. As it turns out he was on a reality show the entire time and they kept sabotaging him when they explain this he simply goes ape shit and kills them anyway. Cut to board room and Vox watching it as he says >”Eh I don’t see this getting a season 2 cancel it syndicate it and get this trash on a talk show tour.”
I like the way you thing but the premise >Easy he gets a job to build a new war machine but needs to prove its battle ready and keeps fricking it up
would have to be spiced up with some comedic shenanigans so that it's not too repetitive.
Relax man it’s 8 episodes it won’t get too repetitive 1 episode gets the job second episode has a block on what to build 3rd episode builds said machine 4 episode it does great until it fails 5th episode the all is lost moment 6th episode back on the horse constant failures Montaigne. 7th episode one last try makes a great machine presents it and it fails.
8th episode he snaps rebuilds everything and bam that’s the show. If I had more than 8 episodes maybe I’d be more ambitious but I don’t want to cram everything in and have 0 pacing.
wouldn't it just be like an animated version of this movie because his colour scheme is like and reminds me of the snakes and reptiles you see in the American Desert (such as Gila Monsters, Corn Snakes and King Snakes even though he's a Cobra) where the Wild West usually takes place, he dresses like and has a similar personality to a villain in Wild West setting who tie people to railroad tracks and also he wouldn't look out of place in Long Gone Gulch which is a Wild West cartoon that has the same drawing style as Hazbin Hotel
Sir Pentious is an interesting character because it feels like there's a good ghost writer behind him in a sea of other individuals that are flat as cardboard or creator pets that are boring despite trying to make them the center of the story. I honestly think Pentious would work best in literally any other actually good/decent cartoon that had a focused team as he is now and manage to be a entertaining stand out without the clutter of his home-series.
meta show about Sir Pentious trying to become an animator after giving up warring. All of his animations are cute little stories that are analogous to the shit everyone gives him in real life except his self-insert character is able to stand up to them.
episodic but with a recurring theme of his self insert seducing a cherri bomb themed character. Cherri bomb makes fun of him irl but eventually begins to support his dream and fights people who bully him.
Final scene is him asking her to do a sex with him and her saying, "ah, frick it."
The hotel's activity for the day is making Valentine's Day cards for each other. Angel makes horny cards, Husk makes lackluster cards, and Nifty's cards are some chaotic mess. Pentious's cardsare cute and endearing and he includes a little 2 frame flip-o-rama type personalized animation for everyone. Charlie praises him for it and Angel says something like, "oh ya, that's actually pretty cool... hey, I oughtta show Cherri this, she'd love it."
Pentious gets excited, tries to hide his excitement, play it cool, posits that "maybe i should make one for cherri too... so she doesn't feel left out seeing that Angel got one!"
Maybe Angel or Husk starts to tease him but then Charlie or Vaggie stops them and encourages him. Maybe Angel texts Cherri to let her know to expect it and to go easy on the guy.
Then pentious goes off to his room and obsessively works on it for a while. Maybe an egg boys b plot plays for a scene or two.
Pentious returns and everyone asks to see the card, but he nervously says it's private and runs off. Delivers it to Cherri alnervously. Cue musical number flip book animation.
Cherri begins to insult him, but stops herself. "Ay you know what you slithering c**t? This is actually kind of nice. I always liked these things when I was a kid."
Then Pentious says some hyperactive infodump-y shit about animating it and how he has a ton of spare time now that he's not building death machines and maybe he'll make some more and she can look at them sometime if she wants to haha jk unless...?
And she says sure, but in some c**ty Australian way.
Final scene of the episode: pentious thanks her for being his friend and she says "oy c**t. We're not friends just because of one fricking cartoon." Pentious gets visibly sad and disheartened, so she follows up with, "I mean, we're not friends, yet, snake boy."
Post credits scene is her and Angel laughing about it on the phone together, but her smiling at the flip book after they hang up.
Easy he gets a job to build a new war machine but needs to prove its battle ready and keeps fricking it up. Finale ends with him trying to take down the company that hired him with his “failed” designs. As it turns out he was on a reality show the entire time and they kept sabotaging him when they explain this he simply goes ape shit and kills them anyway. Cut to board room and Vox watching it as he says
>”Eh I don’t see this getting a season 2 cancel it syndicate it and get this trash on a talk show tour.”
I like the way you thing but the premise
>Easy he gets a job to build a new war machine but needs to prove its battle ready and keeps fricking it up
would have to be spiced up with some comedic shenanigans so that it's not too repetitive.
Relax man it’s 8 episodes it won’t get too repetitive 1 episode gets the job second episode has a block on what to build 3rd episode builds said machine 4 episode it does great until it fails 5th episode the all is lost moment 6th episode back on the horse constant failures Montaigne. 7th episode one last try makes a great machine presents it and it fails.
8th episode he snaps rebuilds everything and bam that’s the show. If I had more than 8 episodes maybe I’d be more ambitious but I don’t want to cram everything in and have 0 pacing.
I thought it would be episodic until the final episode really
Hes the bellhop for the stupid hotel or something and all the bad stuff happens to him for comedy sake.
Can't something good happen to him
Sure when hes off hours he can be in his room having a good time with his eggs or whatever it was.
He shall attain redemption
wouldn't it just be like an animated version of this movie because his colour scheme is like and reminds me of the snakes and reptiles you see in the American Desert (such as Gila Monsters, Corn Snakes and King Snakes even though he's a Cobra) where the Wild West usually takes place, he dresses like and has a similar personality to a villain in Wild West setting who tie people to railroad tracks and also he wouldn't look out of place in Long Gone Gulch which is a Wild West cartoon that has the same drawing style as Hazbin Hotel
His era's lingo and mannerisms gets misinterpreted by everyone and wacky scenerios ensure
Him and the egg boys trying to take over hell
Throw in a romance with Cherry Bomb too
Why would I write a show about you?
Um... uh... because you're going to write a show about EVERYONE!
This is the kind of excuse I would give in this situation
It's incredible that Viv is so in tune with the male experience.
FREE SHOW ABOUT US I LOVE THAT GUY! WOO!
The whole for everyone jokes where the of the episode, i hope he dosn't die in the season finale
Just make Dan Vs. but with him instead of Dan
Might be the best idea ITT.
But this one is great too.
Make it about him mastering his Nen
>Sir Pentious pulls a Gon when he hears his eggbois can't be brought back
Kino
a drama exploring his sexual shenanigans and misadventures with his eggbois, each season being about (1) eggboi
>As the first demon to go to heaven he experiences Fish-out-of-Water problems
>Mostly just gets beaten up by the scenery trying to build death-rays or sneak in his minions early WB cartoon style
>Every episode ends with him enjoying an icecream with Emily, who is unaware of all the pain he's gone through and tells him "Heaven is great!"
Maybe this could work as a series of silent shorts
Sir Pentious is an interesting character because it feels like there's a good ghost writer behind him in a sea of other individuals that are flat as cardboard or creator pets that are boring despite trying to make them the center of the story. I honestly think Pentious would work best in literally any other actually good/decent cartoon that had a focused team as he is now and manage to be a entertaining stand out without the clutter of his home-series.
meta show about Sir Pentious trying to become an animator after giving up warring. All of his animations are cute little stories that are analogous to the shit everyone gives him in real life except his self-insert character is able to stand up to them.
episodic but with a recurring theme of his self insert seducing a cherri bomb themed character. Cherri bomb makes fun of him irl but eventually begins to support his dream and fights people who bully him.
Final scene is him asking her to do a sex with him and her saying, "ah, frick it."
That'd be cute
1st episode:
The hotel's activity for the day is making Valentine's Day cards for each other. Angel makes horny cards, Husk makes lackluster cards, and Nifty's cards are some chaotic mess. Pentious's cardsare cute and endearing and he includes a little 2 frame flip-o-rama type personalized animation for everyone. Charlie praises him for it and Angel says something like, "oh ya, that's actually pretty cool... hey, I oughtta show Cherri this, she'd love it."
Pentious gets excited, tries to hide his excitement, play it cool, posits that "maybe i should make one for cherri too... so she doesn't feel left out seeing that Angel got one!"
Maybe Angel or Husk starts to tease him but then Charlie or Vaggie stops them and encourages him. Maybe Angel texts Cherri to let her know to expect it and to go easy on the guy.
Then pentious goes off to his room and obsessively works on it for a while. Maybe an egg boys b plot plays for a scene or two.
Pentious returns and everyone asks to see the card, but he nervously says it's private and runs off. Delivers it to Cherri alnervously. Cue musical number flip book animation.
Cherri begins to insult him, but stops herself. "Ay you know what you slithering c**t? This is actually kind of nice. I always liked these things when I was a kid."
Then Pentious says some hyperactive infodump-y shit about animating it and how he has a ton of spare time now that he's not building death machines and maybe he'll make some more and she can look at them sometime if she wants to haha jk unless...?
And she says sure, but in some c**ty Australian way.
Final scene of the episode: pentious thanks her for being his friend and she says "oy c**t. We're not friends just because of one fricking cartoon." Pentious gets visibly sad and disheartened, so she follows up with, "I mean, we're not friends, yet, snake boy."
Post credits scene is her and Angel laughing about it on the phone together, but her smiling at the flip book after they hang up.