>make a character cry to show their emotions =/= good writing.

>make a character cry to show their emotions =/= good writing.
When will millennial writers learn this?

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  1. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    This is a major issue that's impacting even the movie industry. I watched like 3 horror movies last year in theaters and every one had some sappy ending that felt more like someone holding a "NOW CRY" sign

  2. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    >show don't tell is bad writing

    • 4 months ago
      Anonymous

      It's not show don't tell. It's "character explains sad scenario and tells you that it's suppose to be really really sad and you know this because the main character starts crying followed by them saying THATS SO SAD"

  3. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    >be Japanese
    >cry
    >outsell entire Amerishart comic industry

    • 4 months ago
      Anonymous

      Yeah, it used to be good. Dont remind me.

    • 4 months ago
      Anonymous

      Having flashbacks every 5 minutes so they can reuse animation isn't good writing either

    • 4 months ago
      Anonymous

      i want to frick bakugo in the bum

    • 4 months ago
      Anonymous

      Having flashbacks every 5 minutes so they can reuse animation isn't good writing either

      I remember reading a thing where Japanese people like western media because they're good at conveying feelings and emotions with imagery or expressions as opposed to needing to explain how their feeling or some kind of narrator bubble telling you what to think.

      • 4 months ago
        Anonymous

        Japanese shows are in dire need of a narrator. They have only two ways of giving exposition and they produce hundreds of anime every year.
        One way is showing us the protagonist attending history class and the other is having a monologue broken into parts so that it is recited by two people as a dialogue. Only instead of a dialogue it is written like a moron who knows the answer to his question asking someone else and then interjecting as the other person answers.

        >Disney be like:"hold my Micky mouse mug b***h"

        Branches from the same tree produce the same fruit.

        • 4 months ago
          Anonymous

          A lot of Japanese shows have narrators. It's actually a shame that they removed a lot of narration from Baki because that is otherwise a pretty good adaptation.
          My favorite one has to be Kaiji narrator because he is so over the top. Good voice acting range too, that guy also voiced Bunji in Gungrave which is the polar opposite in terms of delivery.

          • 4 months ago
            Anonymous

            >BAKI IS BETWEEN LIVE AND DEATH HIS FUTURE AND LIFE DEPENDS ON THESE METAL BALLS، IS HE GOING TO WIN OR LOSE,BAKI? BAKI?BAKI?BAAAAAKKKKKIIIII?

            • 4 months ago
              Anonymous

              >THE ULTIMATE DEVIL DEMONIC PACHINKO MACHINE FROM HELL
              >*Roar sfx as the camera pans around a 3D model of said machine*

        • 4 months ago
          Anonymous

          >Japanese shows are in dire need of a narrator. They have only two ways of giving exposition and they produce hundreds of anime every year.
          Not at all. Only capeshit brains that need everything spelt out everything for them want that shit. Show not tell should be the rule.
          >b-but not every anime is like that
          No shit, the majority is not like that but there are hundreds of them that do it properly. kek I can imagine the average capeshitter reading ashita no joe and wondering why there isn't a narrator every other page telling you what joe feels like or a cartoon fan watching nge for the first time wondering why the characters don't make crazy faces for you to relate with.

          • 4 months ago
            Anonymous

            >watching nge for the first time wondering why the characters don't make crazy faces for you to relate with.
            I can field that one. The animators ran out of money.

      • 4 months ago
        Anonymous

        >they're good at conveying feelings and emotions with imagery or expressions
        Someone post that collage of all the black videogame women screaming simultaneously

    • 4 months ago
      Anonymous

      I AM SAD

    • 4 months ago
      Anonymous

      THE SAD HAS TO SNOT OUT MY NODE

  4. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    It's not so much the CRYING that bothers me as much as it's the blubbering. You can show people cry with dignity.

  5. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    I have a theory that their environment let them have their way when they cried so they're having their characters cry when they want them to have their way.

  6. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    Steven’s constant flow of tears got annoying. A plot would develop to a certain point and then when action should be at its highest, Steven would deliver a tearful monologue and then everyone would decide to be friends.
    It was kind of subversive at first but got predictable and annoying after awhile.

    • 4 months ago
      Anonymous

      That only ever happened with Spinel. Throughout the show Steven had to defeat his enemies (like Peridot) to befriend them or not even befriend them at all (Jasper). And there's a moment where he tries talking to Aquamarine to talk about he feelings and she thinks he's moronic so even the show was mocking this approach.

      • 4 months ago
        Anonymous

        I didn’t even get as far as spinel. He cried to resolve problems A LOT which is partially why I got sick of it and stopped watching.

        • 4 months ago
          Anonymous

          I remember him crying but not to resolve problems. Examples?

          • 4 months ago
            Anonymous

            It's been awhile since I watched it (and I haven't gone back over it), but didn't he deliver a tearful speech to get the other gems to accept the corrupted bug gems?

  7. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    You wanna know the real trick with this. Follow the character around with subtle shows of sadness. A change in vocal tone, a shift in their eye placement, maybe a a little red vein in the corner of the eye. Show that the character is doing their absolute damnest to NOT cry, that's how you get the waterworks going. Works every time.

  8. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    >Disney be like:"hold my Micky mouse mug b***h"

  9. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    The only reason they're crying is because it's Rebecca Sugar's fetish.

  10. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    God, what a disgusting sack of shit

  11. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    What annoys me is that EVERY character seems to cry, or really all express their emotions in the exact same way.
    In SU, everyone cried- girls, boys, adult middle aged men, grannies, serious businessmen, teenagers, ancient aliens, basically alien gods and dictators... Fricking everyone expressed themselves the exact same way. They also all blushed or got angry the exact same way. It's not that 'a character cried' it's that 'a character cried, that's our only way to express any feeling whatsoever.'
    They also use crying to express compassion which is just bullshit, they think making a kid cry is a sign that he's being all caring and empathic to other people. It's basically a lazy use of bad shorthands.

  12. 4 months ago
    Anonymous

    Millennial Americans need to stop basing all their shit on weeb slop

    • 4 months ago
      Anonymous

      The best american animated shows samurai jack and atla are made by huge weebs lmao.

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