Would you read a comic about them?
 Thalidomide Vintage Ad Shirt $22.14 |
 Tip Your Landlord Shirt $21.68 |
Thalidomide Vintage Ad Shirt $22.14 |
Rens Awakening
Would you read a comic about them?
Thalidomide Vintage Ad Shirt $22.14 |
Tip Your Landlord Shirt $21.68 |
Thalidomide Vintage Ad Shirt $22.14 |
Literally who
And why are they so ugly
Because it’s funny
>Ren's Awakening
No, not really
Doesn't look like something that would include cool stuff like dinosaurs and guns
It has silent hill monsters
Do they shoot at them?
They go inside them and reconstruct their brains like in Psychonauts
That's kinda mid, it's not bad but it's easy as frick to fumble and piss a lot of your audience
Partially interested would be my take
Yeah, I’m trying not to fumble it. Any advice?
Don't listen to the fans and have your end point planned from the beginning
If you alter stuff to please your fans you are more likely to frick up
Don’t worry, I do. I can use my own judgement to filter out the criticisms that aren’t relevant to the overall story I’m going for
Draw more of this Ren.
https://oscifir.tumblr.com/
I have. Hell, I’m even offering to release porn of Ren (on the right) if any of the comic posts get more than 100 notes
This is her in the future when she gets chubby
>This is her in the future when she gets chubby
Consider my interest piqued.
There will be chubby girls and muscle girls galore
Consider it even further piqued. Muscle girls are also great.
Oh hell no
Yes you would
eugh
Regarding the girl to the right. How exactly are her pants staying up? She looks to skinny for them.
Notice the string around her hips. The pants are baggy as frick, held up by a string belt, tucked into the boots
I think I see what you’re talking about. Feel like she’d be better off wearing a regular pair of pants. Anyways though, what are your characters even like. What’s the story to this comic exactly.
To the right is Ren. She’s a former acrobatic performer turned knight who wakes up in a post-apocalyptic world filled with “ghosts” (people who were trapped in monstrous bodies that can not be killed). Ren has to jump inside their heads Psychonauts-style to “liberate” them (release their souls so that they can move on to the afterlife)
Katt is on the left. She’s a runaway child who was heavily sheltered her whole life. She developed a strong morbid curiosity and decided to seek out more knowledge about the world by leaving her prison-like mansion. Katt bumps into the amnesiac Ren, and they stick together because Ren needs guidance and Katt needs a body guard
Over the course of the comic, these characters recover Ren’s memories and piece together what happened to the earth and these ghosts
Well I'm not sure if this is something I'd stick with. But I'd at the very least give it a try.
I appreciate your interest
are there any characters with noses smaller than 50% of their face?
No, you can bash them in with a hammer if you want
Sure
https://oscifir.tumblr.com/
Awesome!
Yes