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>How does this work?
>It works like a community toy chest. In the /coc/ threads you are free to post whatever ideas/settings/characters you want, but you have to be OK with other people playing with them (tweaking them, putting them in stories, using them for things, etc.)
>There's no guarantee that what you post will catch on either.
>If the OC you are posting is YOURS for something you are personally doing, then it would go to the "How is your webcomic?" threads.
>If you just want feedback on an OC of yours, then it would go in the "donut steel" threads or drawthreads.
If the thread dies suddenly or you still want to discuss something when there's no thread:
https://boards.plusCinemaphile/coc/
Last time:
- Doodles
- Dynamo greentexts continue
- Tectonic Knight minicomic
- Crackdown's first anniversary
- Other stuff I didn't mention
I slimmed Audrey's waist a bit.
I'm glad someone made the thread because I sure as shit wasn't able to do it today.
At first I thought the problem with Cinemaphile changing the image hash was causing dupe pics in the thread.
Then I read the post.
I'll say it again: RADICAL.
Give them a vacation.
Just not Hawaii again.
What happened the first time?
Something involving hula dancing, fire dancing, or a lei?
Justice doesn't go on vacation.
They probably be forced by SOS and the Mayor possibly since there both obsessed with crime fighting.
Crime too.
I find that a little funny for some reason.
They go to Hawaii under the guise of a vacation to put a stop to Dr. Baron von Verrückt's plot to cause global volcanic eruptions.
Does he have a specific type of science stick, or is he just broadly "SCIENCE!" type of villain?
There’s a 90s JackHammer and Ladybug in
if you want to post it
Good idea.
While LB looks like it’s made by a different artist from a different era, JH is fricking ballin. Like I’d see this guy going toe to toe with superman in a crossover
JH glow up.
Right, looks like he took steroids or something lol. But no they are looks really cool.
How the general public views JackHammer
How Aoko’s goofy boyfriend is
>how the general public views JackHammer
Wait, really?
No offense, but I kind of imagined that people in-universe viewed him as a mid-to-low B-lister
Most people probably don't even know what his name is with where we are right now in the story.
Not unless they watch KillFeed's show.
I guess that's one thing he and Crackdown have in common, so maybe they can bond over that. Well, with difference being that Arthur would much prefer to keep it that way.
You know, sometimes I wonder if they’ll ever have to face off against villains perfectly suited to counter their powers
Driller Jane and Upseal
It'd be funny if they were hyped up as the evil clone kind of deal, but in reality they are a complete joke like Driller Jane just being a regular girl with a power drill and Upseal... I dunno, a guy who just loves pouring flex seal liquid into cracks or something dumb like that.
>Upseal
Well he’s kind of like Ladybug in popularity? Though he might have had an easier time getting recognition with how much of a natural he is with his powers. He mostly sticks to street level. First because he isn’t certain if he wants to move up in the hero world. Second, it’s not like he’s seeking to fight world ending threats. Whatever comes he deals with it, and he’s not afraid to let other heroes handle it if needs be (like in the start of the Corn Maze Monster).
This too
I want to say he’s too much of a simple gentle anime protagonist to be seeking attention and affection… but, well… I’m looking at the first threads on JackHammer and he seems to really want people’s approval. Did that changed?
I was disappointed. I was expecting Tintin stuff with the land going dark and seeing a black sun. It did got darker, but the sun looked the same
I think Jack enjoying the notion of fame makes sense for the character. He's a jock, captain of the sportsball team. He's used to basking in the adulation of his peers for a good play, certainly he'd not see anything wrong with it. Not in a glory hog way so much as enjoying the fruits of his efforts and using popularity as a way to track his progress as a hero.
I don't think he's the team captain.
I don't think he plays sportsball either. I need to dial back the Homestar Runner references, nobody these days is going to get them
It's been a long time since I saw any of those, but I do remember some of them.
>It did got darker
I totally forgot about it today but at the same time I didn't care that much.
Alone ass drive but it was worth it.
A lot of fun things in that thread.
Extreeeeeme!
GET DOWN MR ADVERTISER
Hiro gave up on getting the advertisers, hence the merge back.
I just think it's a funny thing to say tbqh
Hot and spicy.
She needs the sweet n sour sauce on.
>Dynamo League: A Renaissance XIII
>As Saint Neal rested and recovered in his room, Doc turned his attention to James for the next two days, eager to understand more about the young man and his abilities. He escorted James to his office, a room filled with books, medical equipment, and various gadgets.
>Doc: "James, I'm curious about your spring limbs. How do they work?"
>James hesitated for a moment before explaining.
>James: "Well, they're... they're springs, I guess. I can extend them and use them to jump higher or reach things that are far away."
>Doc: "Are there bones inside?"
>James: "I-I'm...I'm not sure"
>Doc: "ok let's take a look"
>Doc used his X-ray vision and started analyzing James' spring Limbs, he saw some thin Elastic bones bent or molded into a coil that can return to shape after being compressed or extended.
>Doc nodded, his eyes curious as he examined James's spring limbs.
>Doc: "Fascinating. And what were you doing before you met Saint Neal?"
>James shifted uncomfortably, memories of his life before Saint Neal flooding back.
>James: "I... I used to work in a gift shop and then started moderating an unknown Nexus forum. I always wanted to help Nexus, but I never knew how."
>Doc listened intently, nodding as James spoke.
>Doc: "And then Saint Neal appeared in your house?"
>James nodded, a small smile playing on his lips.
>James: "Yeah, it was... unexpected, to say the least."
>Doc: "And why do you think the person who helped Saint Neal escape chose you?"
>James scratched his head a bit and didn't have an answer.
>James: "I honestly Have no idea...Maybe because I'm a nobody?"
>Doc raised an eyebrow and asked him with a curious eye.
>Doc: "You see yourself as a nobody, James?"
>James froze for a moment, he never thought about it before and who always said that he was a nobody like it was a normal thing to say.
>James(puzzled): I'm umm...eh"
>Doc shook his head in disbelief and asked James to follow him
>Doc then led James outside to a clear area, where a bottle was placed at a distance. Layla, Marvin, and even Ashley joined them observing from afar and cheering for James.
>Doc: "James, I want you to use your spring limbs to grab that bottle."
>Layla(cheering): "You got this James!"
>James nodded, focusing his concentration as he extended his spring limbs. However, to his frustration, he failed three times in a row, the springs retracting before reaching the bottle.
>James(frustrated): "Come on! come on!... Frick!"
>Doc and the other patients watched, puzzled and concerned.
>Doc: "James, have you ever used your abilities before?"
>James shook his head sheepishly.
>James: "No... I never really had the chance."
>Doc's expression softened, understanding James's situation.
>Doc: "It's alright, James. But you need to get used to this. You need to be ready to embrace your abilities and become a better person."
>Doc then launched into a passionate speech about Nexus and its ideology of being special, of rising above the norm and ruling the world.
>Doc: "We, the Irregulars, are meant to be the rulers of this world. We have abilities that make us unique, and that set us apart. It's time we embraced that and took our rightful place, you have a gift"
>He put his hand on James' shoulder and continued.
>Doc: "You are a gifted person, James.Just like me and Layla and Ashley and Marvin and Even Saint Neal! WE ALL ARE SUPERIOR CREATURES AMONG THOSE WEAKLINGS THAT THEY CALL THEMSELVES REGULARS!!"
>James listened, his determination growing with each word, he felt...proud to know that he was more than a lazy internet addict.
> And how can he refuse this idea, Doc who James saw as a very wise and knowledgeable man told him that he's special and that he should be superior compared to those 'Normal' people.
>James(nodding and smiling): "You're right, Doc. I want to be a part of this. I want to help make a difference."
>Before Doc could reply, the sound of a car entering the sanatorium caught their attention. They rushed outside to see an athletic woman with short black hair stepping out of the car.
>She was wearing an athletic jacket and sunglasses, she looked around and noticed Doc and the others looking at her.
>Doc: "Ultra Olympic Champion Veronica Mash?"
>Veronica checked her phone and then looked at Doc with a curious face.
>Veronica: "Subleader Red Bigeye?"
>Doc nodded and understood that she called him by his Fishin' around codename.
> Veronica's expression changed from curious to joyful and went to Greet and talk with Doc and the other patients.
>Veronica: "I can't believe that we are really meeting face-to-face for the first time! I'm Veronica Mash aka Subleader Goblin Shark!"
>Doc: "Oh I figured haha, well nice to have you here with us!"
>Veronica smiled and looked around.
>Veronica: "Nice place you have here! really hidden and Sheltered, did the other subleader arrive?"
>Doc: "Nope you are the first one to arrive actually!"
>Veronica: "Oh that's good!... OH YEAH! Is Saint Neal really here?!"
>Doc: "Oh yeah he's here, he's just resting from a Medical operation that I did to him two days ago"
>Veronica: "Wait what happened to him?"
>Doc:" he got shot by a bullet that had been laced with a muscle-paralyzing agent, he was shot by two vigilantes"
> Veronica's face became stern and then said.
>Veronica: "Those filthy good-for-nothing mutts shot Saint Neal! that's an outrage!"
>James's eyes widened in awe and excitement, recognizing the famous athlete who was also a subleader of the Pegasus Militia.
>James (whispering to himself): "Goblin Shark..."
>Doc(pointing to James:" Don't worry about those Vigilantes, James over here took care of them"
>Veronica: "You did! You killed those Bastards?!"
>James was shaking from the sudden attention he just received and sheepishly nodded.
>James: "Yea-Yeah...I shot them dead"
>Veronica went to James and started shaking his hands aggressively, James felt like she was lifting him and felt her brute power.
>Veronica: "You did good James!Good job!"
>James(vibrating from her shaking his hand):"Th-tha...than...thanksssss"
>Doc: "Now let us go inside and meet Saint Neal"
>Veronica let James go and went with Doc inside, James looked at his hand which was almost squashed.
>Ashley: "Come on James let's go inside!"
>James knew now how vast and different Saint Neal's Subleader was, and now he truly knew his purpose and goal, To be a valuable piece of The Nexus's future Plans.
I'll say it again.
An attempt was made.
>domination_loss
Nice
I blame Sharpshipper for this.
Nah, Bismarck is definitely a Shark Lass and Belle shipper
hmmm who is more dom DB or BL?
Which one is BL again? Boy Love?
Blue Loon?
They didn’t have any coconut bras in her size.
Excellent. I look forward to the splatastic action.
Need to ENHANCE the palm trees then.
Cool. How will Lustless get out of this one?
>Boss Loss
I misspelled it kek I mean Boss Moss, of course
One naturally assumes Boss Moss has a dominant streak since her backstory is basically going from trafficking victim to crime lord, but maybe that makes it more fun for her to be a sub.
>Blue Loon
Yep, that's Shark Lass
>Bee Knees
Been a while since I heard from that guy.
What /coc/ character do you think would be particularly good or bad at poker?
Arthur normally wouldn't fare too well with all the people oogling him to read his expression, but it would be pretty fun to see him suddenly become a card sharp if he ever ended up in a "D'arby situation".
I think Boss Moss would be good since she'd be taught by her mobster friends.
What do they play for?
i assume cash, but since they're somewhat under her influence they'd be more lenient towards her
Leaves.
Flowers too if they're being wild.
That's a cute idea
hello my friends. Will have next page of Lustless done tomorrow. Finished up this panel tonight now time for bed
The squid will be friendly :3
Are Bee Knees and Mighty Mantis the only heroes who were inspired by sentai? Any villains
>Any villains
Like some big rubbery monsters? None that I know of. In terms of the armored rival who becomes a friend (or more) Mantis has Recluse. There's Goliath with a legion of bug-themed goons.
Percinnius so far seems mostly like an observer type character, one who shows up to witness weird things. Like a more incidental Watcher, or /coc/'s Gondola. Shows up, maybe comments to himself an opinion, leaves to continue investigating his own personal mystery, perhaps with new insight.
Personally, I don't mind waiting for the output, because it's always visually striking. /coc/ generally moves at a fairly glacial pace anyway, so it's not a bother if you take your time with Percinnius.
Is there a name for the minions on the bottom right?
Goliath... something. Goons, guards? It's an alliteration for sure. They're in the Summer Special.
I'm here to ask some questions. The next step of Percinnius' story ISN'T dead, but I'm curious about what some anons might think about it.
>What sorts of things/ stories would you like to see from the character?
I ask primarily because Percinnius is a character with a sort of unique ability to be involved in almost any story anywhere, due to the fact that he has no real "home dimension" and has no ties to anything but his own villains, who aren't real either.
>What method of storytelling do you feel fits him best?
When I write things, I like to keep in mind the method of storytelling and how it can affect the story itself. That goes for Percinnius as well, and I'm of the personal opinion that he can fit in almost any sort of nontraditional digital format, but other anons might disagree.
>Which method of execution do you prefer?
Would anons like it more if I wrote Percinnius' stories a bit faster and with less polish, along the lines of what Dynamo Anon does, or do you not mind waiting half a year for a single step from me?
Also, a WIP for fun
I think he should get headaches (void hole aches?) with flashes from whatever life he had before and tries to find anything that matches what he sees or feels from them.
A hunt for clues for who he is. That can lead him to places.
As for the speed of release, it's your story, you should figure out what your preferences are, unless you fall into that loop of "but I could do it better, I should start over and never advance the plot because I'm too busy redrawing the same thing forever." If that happens then slap yourself until the feeling subsides.
>I think he should get headaches (void hole aches?) with flashes from whatever life he had before and tries to find anything that matches what he sees or feels from them
I was actually already planning something similar. Under certain interpretations the segment I'm working on now is in fact one of those aches, delusional or not.
>Percinnius so far seems mostly like an observer type character
That's the vibe I've gotten from him too, though not necessarily in the 'observer' role. Moreso that his personal quest requires a lot of sidequesting, and investigation of other characters into their own stories. Like he would show up to a place wherein a story is already midway through, and force himself into it for a short while in order to accomplish his own goal, relatively ignorant to the greater tale he's now involved in.
>I don't mind waiting for the output, because it's always visually striking
I can't draw, so I make up for it by artificially inducing mental breakdowns with heroic doses of Salvia and a box of foreskins I stole from a synagogue
>unless you fall into that loop of "but I could do it better, I should start over and never advance the plot because I'm too busy redrawing the same thing forever."
Thank God I haven't fallen into that. I'm just lazy, but have considered more short term and fast approaches to solving the problem. It's really just discipline since I can draw pretty fast and when I started I was putting out a page every 3 days or so.
Did anyone see the eclipse? I can't because it's cloudy.
It's raining so nope. It sucks.
Cloudy here, too. Was cool to see the area turn to nighttime, though
just because of the yuri art and concepts that get posted here from time to time, does anyone here think it would be funny to have a gay heroine in the Cinemaphile verse with all of the other hero girls thinking she has a crush on them and agonizing over how to let her down easy. And then when one of them finally gets the opportunity, she finds out that the lesbian hero finds other superheroes to be a turn off
It could be funny, but it feels more like a one-off gag that shouldn't be expanded on from there.
Eh fair deal. I never saw it as much more than a possible Ladybug and Diving Belle gag strip
Could be a good gag for the perpetually-put-upon Pussy Willow
Getting this thing started, again! Check the pic on instructions.
Session Url: drawpile://friendly-drawing.crabdance.com/01hv02t8fmyzjd8g9857831khd
Password: butts
This week's drawpile.
People didn't stick around for long this time.
Nice pile. I really like it. Those ladybugs in dynamic poses are always so cool.
Lovely! Really Nice
this is unironically some members' ideology
very cool stuff
So what's going on with transformer Mighty Mantis? He shows up in draw piles a lot.
A guy who's part Batman in concept has gotta have a cool car, right? And if his thing is powered armor, then if the car transforms into a big robot, that's just natural! Plus Marley is a big Mantis fan, and since I doodled her a mech I felt like I should do one for Mantis too.
How much you wanna bet she'll use it if somebody ate her saved burgers in the fridge.
War mechs for home defense? California would never allow it.
California exist in LL's verses?
Pretty sure LL is west coast, so ye. OR a Cinemaphile equivalent
Alas, while it is a wondrous world, it is no utopia. Some evils yet remain. Like California.
I live in California and most of it is fine
It’s just the government and a few groups that suck
It might surprise you to learn that despite the stereotypes, we have an equal amount of political correctness crazies and fire and brimstone Christians and they are both equally bad
>equal amount
>when he cites the very government that sucks
I'm willing to bet those fire and brimstone Christians are not the government which makes it the very definition of not equal. What you're spouting is practically stereotypical of Californians by the way.
Bruh, there's an entire two boards for being angry that California exists on. Do you really need /coc/ too?
Dude, I’m a Christian myself and I have had many things ruined by those people.
Particularly they always show up at charity events and try to get them shut down
As far as I’m concerned there’s no difference between a woke lunatic screaming at random people for “being racist” and a fundamentalist screaming at random people for being “sinners” both are just ruining innocent people’s days
I regret making the California crack now. Dial it back folks, we don't need a lot of discourse on this topic.
Fair enough sorry. I was more so trying to use my experience as a Segway to suggest a Ladybug in California storyline with some of the comedy coming from her interactions with two opposing groups who fail to see that they’re equally obnoxious
It's great to see more LL art.
Didn't expect to see the Blangs pop up in one of these! Looks like a they're at some Space Yacht party, too.
Do sheep dream of electric people?
What you mean? From what?
>Dynamo League: A Renaissance XIV
>Meanwhile, as Saint Neal paced around his room, thoughts racing through his mind about the Nexus and the Pegasus Militia's next move, Doc and Veronica made their way towards him. The door to Saint Neal's room creaked open, and the two entered to find Saint Neal deep in thought, his brow furrowed with determination.
>Doc: "Saint Neal, we have a visitor."
>Saint Neal turned to face them, a mix of surprise and relief washing over his face as he saw Veronica standing there, the Ultra Olympic Champion and Subleader of the Pegasus Militia.
>Saint Neal: "Veronica... Goblin Shark. It's good to see you."
>Veronica smiled, her presence filling the room with a sense of energy and determination.
>Veronica: "Saint Neal, it's been too long. I heard what happened to you, and I'm here to help in any way I can."
>Saint Neal nodded gratefully, gesturing for them to take a seat.
>Saint Neal: "Doc, fill her in on what we've been discussing."
>Doc nodded, taking a seat beside Saint Neal as he explained their plans for "The Irregulars Renaissance" and their need to unite the subleaders for a common cause.
>Doc: "Veronica, we believe it's time for the Irregulars to rise up and take our rightful place. The Nexus has become too unpredictable, and mostly importantly Lost. We need to change that."
>Veronica listened intently, her expression serious and focused.
>Veronica: "I agree, Doc. The Nexus has lost sight of its original purpose. We need to bring about change, and we need to do it together."
>Saint Neal nodded, his eyes shining with determination.
>Saint Neal: "That's why I've called all the subleaders here. We need to unite our forces, combine our strengths, and take down those who would stand in our way."
>Veronica: "Count me in, Saint Neal. I'll do whatever it takes to make this happen."
>As they discussed their plans, the other patients were busy with James, helping him understand his powers and his role in the Irregulars.
>Layla took James aside, her moth-like eyes shining with wisdom.
>Layla: "James, to understand your powers, you must first understand yourself. You are more than just a regular person. You have a gift, a unique ability that sets you apart."
>James listened intently, feeling a sense of purpose and determination welling up inside him.
>James: "I... I never saw it like that before."
>Marvin and Ashley joined the conversation, each sharing their own insights and experiences with their abilities.
>Marvin: "James, we all have gifts that are part of us. They are a reflection of who we are, our strengths, and our weaknesses."
>Ashley nodded in agreement, her candle-molding abilities flickering with different scents as she spoke.
>Ashley: "When I'm happy, I create candles with a sweet, candy-like smell. When I'm sad, it's a beach scent, both good and bad. It's a part of me, just like your spring limbs are a part of you."
>James was amazed by their wisdom and insights, realizing for the first time the true potential of his abilities.
>James: "I... I want to learn more. I want to be a part of this."
> Suddenly Alfred appeared and started walking toward James, he was mumbling the whole way and then he started shouting in front of his face.
>Alfred: "And they said to me: WHY DO YOU WANT TO USE YOUR HAIR AS A BOMB?! And I said: DON'T BLAME ME! I WAS BORN WITH A GIFT OF MAKING BOMBS AND WHOEVER CREATED ME GAVE ME A REASON AND A PURPOSE AND I WILL USE MY GIFT AS MUCH AS I WANT, BABY!"
>James:".....ehh thanks that's interesting..."
>Alfred smiled and started laughing manically.
>ALfred: "And then I said: TELL ME I'M WRONG BABY! And they said: I CAN'T BECAUSE YOU ARE NOT HAHAHA!"
>As they continued their conversation, Doc and Veronica were deep in discussion with Saint Neal about the Irregulars Renaissance.
>Doc: "Now with the subleaders coming here and meeting, we will able to start the big change, we should really control some Subleaders who are too extreme with their actions...we don't want them to ruin the Renaissance"
>Saint Neal nodded, his mind already formulating a plan.
>Saint Neal: "I hear you Doc, we need to eliminate any troubles in our way even if this means getting rid of some people, we have to do that for the greater good."
>Doc nodded, understanding the urgency of the situation. He got up from his seat and headed out of the room to make the necessary preparations for any future troubles.
>Saint Neal sat back in his chair, a sense of determination filling him.
>Saint Neal: "It's time to start 'The Irregulars Renaissance'."
>Just then, more cars began to arrive at the sanatorium, Some were fancy and looked expensive, the sound of engines filling the air. Subleaders from all over were arriving, ready to join the cause.
>Veronica: "Looks like we're not the only ones who want change."
>Saint Neal smiled, a sense of hope and determination filling his heart.
>Saint Neal: "No, we're not alone. Together, we can make a difference."
>As the cars continued to arrive at the sanatorium, Saint Neal sat deep in thought, contemplating the events that had led them to this moment. >Veronica, sitting beside him, watched him carefully, sensing the weight of responsibility on his shoulders.
>Veronica: "Saint Neal, why did you choose us to be your subleaders?"
>Saint Neal turned to face her, his eyes filled with determination.
>Saint Neal: "Veronica, Doc, and all the others... I chose you because you're strong, you're loyal, and you believe in the vision of building a better future for the Irregulars."
>Veronica nodded, understanding his words.
>Veronica: "We Believe in our cause and we always do but we've seen what some of the Nexus and the Pegasus Militia have become. They've lost their faith in the cause and forgotten their purpose. It's time for us to step up and lead the way forward."
>Saint Neal: "Exactly. We need strong and loyal people by our side, people who are willing to do what it takes to make this vision a reality."
>Veronica: "And we will, Saint Neal. We'll stand by your side and fight for this cause."
>Saint Neal smiled, a sense of gratitude and determination filling him. he knew that with his Subleaders with him, he was stronger than he ever was and was ready to Change the world with them.
I'm curious to see what are you gonna do with this, but I have some things to say.
One, ditch the word "determination". It's not the first time you abuse it and it quickly lose all meaning. And I can't help but notice it, so no immersion for me.
Two, I'd say choose a POV character. I think one thing that bothers me is that you are in everyone's mind at the same time ("Doc nodded, understanding the urgency of the situation", "Saint Neal sat back in his chair, a sense of determination filling him" etc.)
Take a character and stick the camera on his/her shoulder for the duration of a scene, so that I can vicariously live an adventure through him/her.
Three, I think the less abstract a word/sentence, the better. And show, don't tell. Or at least don't tell after you've shown ("Veronica nodded, understanding his words").
All this said, you are amazing for keeping up with this output. I hope this story will continue.
And try not to take my advice as gold, and don't apply it all at the same time. Try to notice if you think things get better once you make some changes.
I mean, what I want to say is don't let the rules stop you from writing.
OH MY GOD!
i really like when people give me feedback! you don't know how happy i am rn. and don't worry, that feedback motivates me to write better, encouraging me to write more.
i will try to use your advice, especially the second and third advice so thanks a lot.
>you are amazing for keeping up with this output. I hope this story will continue.
Thanks a lot and i just said many threads ago, i will continue writing Dynamo League until I run out of ideas or something really bad happens to me kek
i have plans for the next three story arcs so far and i will do my best to give readers something entertaining to read.
and again thanks for reading and for your important feedback!
I'm glad you took my advices well, I feared I was too harsh on you.
I hope you'll get better and better and to see more of the Dynamo League in the future.
>I'm glad you took my advices well, I feared I was too harsh on you.
don't worry about it , you weren't rude or anything
heck you were respectful and i thank you for that.
Do dreams sheep of people electrical?
No wonder we’re so dead, somebody made a standalone Golden Girl thread.
It's the same standard shitposting and should really have no bearing on actual constructive discussion here.
Mostly shitposts as per usual
But also slightly evolving the idea of what the male version of her from "boy with big PP" to other aspects of him possibly being exaggerated to convey possibility of what unexpected growth spurts might make crime fighting awkward.
That only took what, 9 years, for them to think outside of the box
I don't trust anything that's born of that kind of spite and nor should any of you.
Why are you lumping me with the shitposters, I'm the drawgay by the way. I saw a prompt and tried to deliver what OP asked in good faith. I can't believe you people are so fricking childish.
GG is a, uh, high energy topic around here. Other /coc/ creations generally attract less controversy, though that could just be a consequence of attracting a lot less attention in general.
I don't think he's gonna garner any steam though so it's dead in the water anyhow.
Ya never know what'll take off. If nothing else it'll be a version of "rule 63 GG" for people to come back to when the idea inevitably resurfaces.
>when the idea inevitably resurfaces.
When the idea inevitably resurfaces it'll be to make the same jokes and shitposts. Reality and what is on the books will continue to not matter. Look at the "discussion" around Audrey's age if you don't believe me. Or hell, the "discussion" around the very idea of giving her any kind of characterization or lore.
To be frank I'm not involved with GG stuff so I'll take your word on it, I'm just trying to mediate a heated discussion.
I respect your endeavoring to do so, I just worry it's kinda futile since this is still Cinemaphile at the end of the day.
He's trying to mediate a heated discussion!
Get 'em!!
Just trying to describe what I had been observing in the other thread
I said "mostly shitposts" in regard to the level of people attempting humorous posts without much discussion or the constant bickering back and forth of GG being something in general without any actual building on the discussion topic.
I can't claim to be above it myself having been the first one in that thread to comment about a boy with huge boobs in response to the original posters question. I do tend to assume most of the discussion on this site in every thread is predominantly playful shitposts in jest with small glimmers of constructive exchange.
Sorry if it seemed I was disparaging you and your attempts to follow through with the creative aspect of the prompt.
Keep up the art
Lord knows we need better Drawgays than I here
>I saw a prompt and tried to deliver what OP asked in good faith
That's the thing. I don't think the question *was* asked in good faith. History has shown it seldom is. Even /coc/, which treats Golden Girl as a legitimate project when even her standalone threads don't, has its "platinum pjoke" or whatever that crap was, shitposting about that particular topic.
I say this as an anon that tried giving you advice on it, it was a good attempt, but it was an attempt in response to what was most likely a troll question.
I want to comment on the second pic of the boy.
>Huge, HUGE, HUUUGE!
>Damn dude, can you even move?
But anyway, I actually like it on it's own.
>>Damn dude, can you even move?
If I'm taking this seriously I think the reason it doesn't work as a rule 63 counterpart to Audrey's whole deal is because the answer is "yes". There's no downside to huge 90s muscle, unless you go full Power Broker and have him be debilitated by it.
It's better than the alternatives, sure but it'd need drawback. It has to be something he can't turn off, and he probably shouldn't be able to control his strength.
In all honesty, I don't think there is a real r63 counterpart to GG.
Big Dick Problems may have been made as a rebuttable to Busty Girl Problems, but the comparison still isn't quite right.
A boy struggling with puberty in a comparable way to Audrey just doesn't line up. Sudden awkward boners just aren't the same as suddenly having to deal with huge breasts.
I mean, maybe if the boy ends up with like an afro of chest hair or something, but that's still not an apt comparison.
I agree with everything you're saying, just with more bitterness and cynicism.
What do you have to be biter about? It's the porn, isn't it?
Most of my younger relatives ended up turning into beanpoles practically overnight. Voice cracks included. Awkward and terrible, just like how I remember it being, but this time I get to be a spectator instead of the spectacle.
She really is a sort of gag character. It's just a matter of how well the gag can be implemented. The setup is what's key.
If you want her to knock the magical artifact or missile launching button out of the bad guys hands accidentally with her boobs, you have to spend the effort to get her into that situation where it can actually happen.
>What do you have to be biter about? It's the porn, isn't it?
That but more the futility of the effort. Kind of seems like no matter how much work we put into the GG universe anons can just go
>nuh uh doesn't count just porn you're all pedos
I just ignore those anons. They hardly ever show up in these threads anyway.
GG is just campy golden/silver age stories with a nice pair of breasts slapped on. To me it's all about playing the camp like a love letter like how Brave and the Bold did it while also throwing in boob jokes/gags.
I'm the drawgay, you can make it that if he gets too big he'll go into hypertensive shock and have a cardiac arrest?
I was approaching it through a more body embarassment puberty scenario and wanted to veer away from all the dick and balls scenarios. Boys experience growth spurts during puberty as well and get embarrassed by shit aswell.
Audrey's deal is physical impediment, not social embarrassment.
I mean, she does have that problem but not for the big obvious reasons.
Oh, she's just mostly a gag character then? I guess I went way too opposite since I went for a more extreme character that is technically silly but played straight. What this anon also is a good idea
where he may get carried away and get too big and get a heart attack.
>Oh, she's just mostly a gag character then?
It's complicated.
Back to the planning board for the character then, so far I didn't even give him a costume yet but I am married to his concept. I just gotta sell it to you all.
Are you set on putting him in the 90s? If that's the case then Audrey is quite a bit older and taller by then.
Anyway, goodnight.
Well his entire thing is that he gets 90s tier musculature albeit just with his chest and arms.
Never skip leg puberty.
I think you need to familiarize yourself with what you're trying to make a counterpart to and that would save a lot of correction time.
At some point I do have to divorce him from being solely a counterpart to GG and just be his own thing.
Mission Failed Successfully then. Continue.
Honestly I think he looks fine as he is anon, maybe give him a domino mask I guess to hide his face if need be?
Correct me if I'm wrong but wasn't the 90s was the time artists were moving away from domino masks?
I don’t think so, like the Bat Family, Green Lantern etc were still very much using those type of masks. I think the 90s were more focused on pouches and belts but that’s not really applicable here
Give him one of those weird face- crowny things that everyone had around that era.
As was the style at the time
Jean Grey reminds me of GGu though. Would be a cool Halloween costume for this year.
Well, there's this guy.
No, there isn't.
90s, huh? That's BB era.
Being shirtless like this reminds me of Shang Chi and Luke Cage having done the same before, I like it. The face is cute but handsome, nice job anon with the design.
The only benefit is at least we get more art of her.
No, we really don't.
If I was lying I'm crying.
Sometimes we are lucky if a random artist finds her and gives it a shot.
question: would drawing comics with a pencil brush frick up my ability to learn to draw? I've been working on a writing project for years now but it's painfully obvious that a novel is the wrong format for this story
Short answer: no.
Long answer: Learning is much more about internalizing lessons about constructing shapes or doing gestures. The tools you use to do that will teach you how to use those tools but the skills themselves translate across digital or traditional mediums.
fricking shit, did I miss the Stargaze thread? I've been busy pulling a double to make up for being at the Solar Eclipse all day yesterday?
>Stargaze fan took a day off for eclipse viewing
Based and on brand
Well to be fair if I HAD remembered, my phone would have still been dead from all the Sun Photography
Don't worry, anon. You didn't miss anything.
I was so late in making the thread that I thought it would have been better to miss a week rather than having a Stargaze Tuesday.
But
is right, maybe it was destiny.
I'm working on things for the threads, so maybe next monday I will be able to show results. Speaking of which, does anyone here has any idea how to organize informations for a big project? I'm trying some things on my own, but I'm definetly not above suggestions. Like, how do you make a summary of everything that was said about Ladybug and her universe?
We live in a timeline where people are out for blood, with no concern about trying to understand. I see a lot of potential in GG. Yeah, it's a young girl with an oversexualized body, but her comic isn't necessarily a doujin with the tag "oppai_e-girl", where the selling point is sex. Instead, it can be about the problems of adolescence and the image of one's body. You can make so much things that aren't about sex, and even the ones that are about sex don't have to be porn.
But alas, humans are creatures that crave violence and the outlets for it disappeared one after another. So if there's an easy target, people will shot without a second thought.
>Like, how do you make a summary of everything that was said about Ladybug and her universe?
She's a part of the main Cinemaphileverse, so 90% of the wiki is about "her universe".
https://the-conservatory.fandom.com/wiki/Time_Line_of_the_/co/verse
I should rephrase that better. How do you organize all the informations about her and the people that appear in her stories in a manner that is understandable and easily approachable for both the people involved in making contents for her and people who are interested in exploring her world?
I've the same problem with Stargaze, I'm starting to think that organizing the posts isn't enough, but I don't want to reinvent the wheel if there's already a way to do what I want to do.
Hmm...
Maybe you can make one of these "relationship chart" things with Marley at the center?
A relationship chart, huh? Defining the story and the lore starting from the characters... I'll see what I can do, thank you for this advice.
You think if she was created in the mid 2000s most people wouldn't bat an eye or be all "typical male creators" and live on?
>if she
And I do mean GG.
At the very least, people on the internet wouldn't have been so contrarian.
Then maybe I'm wrong, but I don't remember so many moralgays everywhere.
It's not even legitimate moralgayging it's just trolling that uses it as a justification.
But enough of that shit let's be constructive. Have we named cities and locations other than Platinum City? For some reason I think Donna Dynamo should operate after a place that ends in -polis.
Hmm, Quarterpolis or Dollarpolis. Gave it my best shot.
Knox City is the sister city to Platinum City.
Other than that, I don't think so.
Would it be conceded of her if Donna "Dynamo" Dinopoulos had a futuristic city that she designed and built using her inventions named after her?
"Dinopolis, the city of the future." I think the residents are aware of the irony of the name having dino in it.
>Gold themed:
Auropolis? Khrusopolis? Goldsville?
>Movement and making themed:
Telolopolis/Kelopolis? Technepolis?
But probably
makes a better point.
Since DD would be a different series in the meta it'd make sense for the naming convention to be different. I was thinking something based in celestial, or meteorological stuff, like Skyway City or Cloud City or something like that. But they all sound like Sonic levels to me.
Girl Glory lives outside of Platinum city, yes?
Does her town have a name?
If Platinum City is Gotham, and Knox City is Bludhaven, then wherever Girl Glory operates would probably be something like Happy Harbor or Jump City, right?
>Platinum City is Gotham
I see them as opposite cities with opposite heroes.
I mean in the sense that Silver Queen is basically a merged DC trinity leaning towards Batman, and Golden Girl is a Robin that goes off to her own city during her "Nightwing" phase.
What does she take from Superman beyond the squint?
General positivity, a backstory less about vengeance, and a lack of brooding?
Wondy has those
There's also the leadership thing. I dunno if it was ever really hard confirmed but I was under the impression we all agreed that Silver Queen was sort of "in charge" of the Sorority of Sentinels.
Yeah? That's why it's "unofficial".
Leadership roles are probably leftover from WWII service.
Yeah, I don't know about the full trinity. The general concept has always been along the lines of a cross between Wonder Woman and Adam West Batman.
Do the crusaders work in their own city?
Thoughts on Jupiter City for Donna Dynamo?
I was gonna go with "Thorpolis" but I think Jupiter City keeps the thunder god name scheme but sounds better.
Seems easier to say aloud than Thorpolis
Sure, how far away is it? Does it have a monorail?
Probably at least a day's travel away, and sure why not. It should be more futuristic and sciencey.
There's a lightening tower Donna Dynamo uses to get the gigawatts needed for her big machines.
Just one or a few littered through out the city?
If they're arranged in a grid pattern, then they can act as lightening rods for the city. They'd need to be spaced out enough so the lightening doesn't arc (a very big arc) between them.
This would mean that her big machines and lab would need to be located under the city so all that lightening can be channeled into them.
Oh thank the Void
I always thought that the Void was something dark in the Stargaze setting. But maybe people fear it like a certain anon would like people to fear a certain version of God.
As
said, it's easier to pronounce than the rest, except Dinopolis.
It is but I don't want to summon Fred
Princess of the Universe page 17!!
Lustless battles her first monster
tags: Consentacles
Her entire body seems to get squished sometimes
ill get it right eventually
Was thinking about the GG video game idea from a few weeks ago
Tried to think of what names for levels could be fun
>The Racketeer
level 1 :Hired Goons?
>Rocker Billy and Roller Betty
level 2: To the Beat of the Music
>The Clown King
level 3: Circus Flambe’ AKA The Show is Just Heating Up
>Yokozuna Yeti
level 4: Snow Flurry of Fury
>Dr. Baron von Verrückt
level 5: Go to Lab, Get Results AKA Animal Tested, Scientist Approved
>The Quiz Master
level 6: Quagmire of the Quiz Master
>Iron Girl
level 7: Will of the people MY FOOT!
>Jade Empress
level 8: To the Top of Jade Tower Aka Next Stop Eighth floor, Jade golems, Boss battles and Women’s Lingerie
Quilogussy
Any chance for Eiko getting some love? Maybe as GG's Japanese friend? Or something?
>Maybe as GG's Japanese friend?
No.
Who is she?
>Dynamo League: A Renaissance XV
>Saint Neal marched through the halls of the sanatorium, a sense of urgency driving me forward. The time had come to gather the other subleaders, to unite our forces and begin the Irregulars Renaissance.
> As he approached the meeting room, he could feel the weight of responsibility on his shoulders.
>This was their chance to make a difference, to reclaim the ideals and purpose that the Nexus and Pegasus Militia had lost.
>He pushed open the door to the meeting room, his eyes scanning the faces of the other five subleaders who were already gathered inside. Each one of them was a key figure in their respective fields, important people with unique abilities and roles in society.
>The first subleader he approached was Amelia Wells, a renowned reporter known for her fearless investigative journalism. She also was responsible for indirectly spreading Saint Neal's speeches to people under the name of exclusive Interviews.
>Next to her was a really Tall and slender man with four eyes, Noah Lindström the CEO of the Website FreakyTech who was responsible for hiding the ID of the subleaders online and censoring any risky info about the pegasus militia and The Nexus.
> The third subleader sitting was Keith R. Ruiz a College professor who used to recruit new members to The Nexus by promising them a better life and better future.
>On the other side of the room, Saint Neal saw Evelyn Chen, a charismatic spokesman, and activist who had dedicated his life to fighting for equality and justice. sitting down with her long brown hair and External gills from his neck.
>Finally, there was Xavier Ramirez, a former Police chief he was also a successful Politician for a short period and was the person who gave the Title of Saint to Neal and also was the reason for a lot of aggressive Militia attacks and radical ideas.
>Saint Neal cleared my throat, commanding their attention as he addressed them.
>"Thank you all for coming," Saint Neal began, his voice commanding attention. "We have urgent matters to discuss, so let's not waste any time. We need to start the meeting immediately."
>The subleaders exchanged glances, but they nodded in agreement and followed Saint Neal to the table at the center of the room.
>Once they were all seated, Saint Neal wasted no time in addressing the pressing issue at hand. "As you all know, we stand at a critical juncture in history. The Nexus and the Pegasus Militia have lost their way, their moral compass shattered. It's time for us to rebuild from scratch."
>"My subleaders, we have no time to waste. The Irregulars Renaissance begins now. We need to unite our forces and take back what is rightfully ours."
>Evelyn raised an eyebrow, her gaze piercing.
>"Saint Neal, what exactly do you have in mind?"
>Saint Neal took a deep breath, his voice steady as he outlined his plan.
>"We must not repeat the mistakes of the past," Saint Neal continued, his voice rising with conviction. "We cannot simply recruit more members or use whatever means necessary to secure our future. We need to start anew, with a clear vision and unwavering principles."
>Suddenly, his tone turned fierce, his anger boiling to the surface. "When I was in prison, I witnessed firsthand the decline of our organizations. The corruption, the greed, the loss of purpose. We cannot allow that to continue. We must dismantle the Pegasus Militia and the Nexus, brick by brick, and rebuild from the ground up!"
>The subleaders listened in silence, their eyes wide with shock at Saint Neal's bold proclamation, then Xavier raised his voice asking.
>Xavier: "But Saint Neal, How can we do that? Pegasus Militia already established and built their reputation and place in the world, we can just start from scratch?!"
>Saint Neal: "A reputation that made you forget your vision...our vision! a Vision that I started to build when I was a teen and cost me half of my life and my two siblings! FRICK THAT REPUTATION! ALL OF YOU FAILED ME AND FAILED THE MOVEMENT!"
> The subleader looked down in Shame and Saint Neal got more heated.
>Saint Neal's eyes flashed with willpower as he rose to his feet, his hands clenched into fists. "We will start by forming the Sun Phoenix Movement. A new organization, with a new reformed ideology. We will recruit new members, train them, and equip them for the mission ahead. And in two months, the Sun Phoenix will rise from the ashes of the old."
>Doc: "Agreed"
>Saint Neal turned to face Doc, who had been standing silently by the door, observing the heated exchange.
>"Doc," Saint Neal's voice was filled with determination, "we will need your expertise in training and equipping our new recruits for the Sun Phoenix Movement."
>Doc nodded solemnly, his eyes reflecting a mixture of respect and determination. "Consider it done, Saint Neal. I will do everything in my power to prepare our forces for the coming revolution."
>The other subleaders, though initially taken aback by Saint Neal's bold plan, were now beginning to show signs of enthusiasm. Amelia raised her hand to speak.
>"What about the High Authority?" she asked, her voice tinged with concern. "They have immense power and resources. How do we plan to defeat them?"
>Before Saint Neal could respond, Noah interjected. "Subleader Amelia, we don't need to defeat them. We need to show them that our cause is just and our movement unstoppable. If we can convince enough irregulars to join us, the High Authority will have no choice but to surrender."
>Amelia nodded, her expression thoughtful. "You're right, Noah. Our strength lies in our numbers and our unity."
>Saint Neal, pleased with their growing resolve, continued. "We will start by recruiting new members to the Sun Phoenix Movement. We will spread our message far and wide, appealing to irregulars who have grown disillusioned with the old ways."
>Keith spoke up next. "We must also ensure that our recruits are properly trained and equipped. We cannot afford to send unprepared irregulars into battle."
>Saint Neal nodded in agreement. "That's where Doc comes in. He will oversee the training and preparation of our forces, ensuring that they are ready for whatever challenges lie ahead."
>With each passing moment, the subleaders' enthusiasm grew, their doubts and reservations fading away. They began to clap and cheer, their voices joining together in a chorus of support for Saint Neal and the Sun Phoenix Movement.
>"Even through the darkest days," they chanted, their voices echoing through the room, "our passion will always light our way!"
>Saint Neal felt a surge of pride and hope wash over him as he looked around the room at his fellow subleaders. Together, they would forge a new path forward for the Irregulars, a path of unity, strength, and unwavering purpose.
>Meanwhile in Dynamo League HQ, Marmot-man sat at a table with Agent Agatha Lead who was interrogating him about Captain Under-socks involvement with Saint Neal's escape, he was irritated by this.
>"So Joe...sorry Marmot-man," she said with a mocking voice, "Did you know about Captain Under-socks going to meet the criminal mastermind known as Saint Neal?"
>Marmot-man: "Oh what do you think? Agent Lead?"
>Agent AL: "I think you are hiding something from us?"
>Marmot-man(smiling): "What makes you think that?"
>Agent AL: "Just the Fact you already hiding something from your loved ones...a little secret mission that only you and Liza and My uncle knew about, hmm?"
>Marmot-man facial expression changed but then smiled again.
>Marmot-man(sarcastically): "Don't make me nostalgic, I will start crying"
>Agent AL(slightly annoyed): "Wow I never knew that you could be as obnoxious as the other heroes, Joseph."
>Marmot-man shrugged and stood up and before he got out, he thanked the agent and told her to tell Her one last thing.
>Marmot-man: "Whatever I did and whatever I do and whatever I will ever it's always for the greater good of people around me, Agent Tyler Lead knew and I wish that one day you will too Agent Agatha Lead"
>Agent AL looked at him and said with a stern face," his trusted heroes like you and it cost him everything, and I will not do the same"
>Marmot-man shook his head.
>"I see...have a nice day then," he said and he got out of the room.
>a sense of urgency driving me forward
Feeling pressured to get out the greentexts or are you just doing some method writing by stepping into the shoes of the characters?
But what exactly is the plan?
Ah, back to Joe. His life is just pocketed with secrets.
>Feeling pressured to get out the greentexts
i mean i wanted to finish the arc before the end of the week but no i wasn't really pressured
> are you just doing some method writing by stepping into the shoes of the characters?
i made a mistake and wrote "me" instead of "him" also tried to write the meeting from Saint Neal's POV like the anon said to me in
>But what exactly is the plan?
Saint Neal felt pressured by everything he experienced so far and didn't have time to plan the final plan his plan so far is to reform the movement and "correct" their past mistakes and use some new blood to the movement by recruiting new members and training them, and during the two months they will plan for their big Move or their "renaissance" and how they will achieve it
NGL wanted to show that yeah the antagonists don't always need to have a solid plan from the beginning but I'm not sure if this is a good thing or not.
>Ah, back to Joe. His life is just pocketed with secrets.
indeed he is.
>write the meeting from Saint Neal's POV like the anon said to me
I'm that anon. I want to stress that a character being the pov doesn't necessarily imply that you must write in first person. Just that you can't write as if you are everywhere and in the mind of every character.
>I'm that anon. I want to stress that a character being the pov doesn't necessarily imply that you must write in first person. Just that you can't write as if you are everywhere and in the mind of every character.
i know and i did kek
i was writing and thinking out loud and typed me instead of him and our instead their
This got better. I had an easier time reading this.
So Saint Neal is rebranding his organization. Hopefully he won't be just talk and no action, given that:
>"We cannot simply recruit more members or use whatever means necessary to secure our future.
And then:
>We will recruit new members, train them, and equip them for the mission ahead.
But I can't into plots so I'm curious to see where this will go.
Now, even if I must feel like Dr Zap (Comet's tutor) doing this, let me point out some things.
Besides the most obvious ones (there's a first person appearing randomly), that infodump in the first and second post is a bit much. I don't need to know everyone's name if they aren't important in the story. But if you want to pull a Chekov's Gun with one of them, then maybe it can be alright to list them all. Just know that it costs you an infodump and there must be ways to make it better. Moreover, if you e.g. introduced Evelyn just before she speaks, I think that would be more impactful.
Then, avoid verbs that tell how your pov character perceive things, i.e.
>Saint Neal saw Evelyn Chen
You introduced the others with "next to her was", "there was", "SITTING" (this is a better verb than "to be"). If Neal is the pov, it's obvious he's the one to see things. And again:
>Saint Neal felt a surge of pride and hope wash over him
Compare this with "A surge of pride and hope washed over Saint Neal". Does this read better? I bet it does, but I can be wrong so I'm seriously asking for your opinion.
Two other things:
>commanding attention
You're repeating yourself.
>Nodded in agreement
Show AND Tell.
>Saint Neal's voice was filled with DETERMINATION
>Doc nodded solemnly, his eyes reflecting a mixture of respect and DETERMINATION.
In two adjacent lines...
Anyway, good job. I liked this. Also the part with Marmot-Man is nice, I don't have much to point out about it.
oh yeah more feedback,let's go!
>But I can't into plots so I'm curious to see where this will go.
Saint Neal meant that they couldn't add new members and ask them to help without any preparation or training and they must be more organized and prepared.
> I don't need to know everyone's name if they aren't important in the story
no no trust me you will need it later, as much as i like creating new side characters the subleader will be important in the future
> If Neal is the POV, it's obvious he's the one to see things
yeah, you are right i should have gone with the verb "Notice" because he did notice her in the room.
>In two adjacent lines...
yeah i just think the word "DETERMINATION" has a better meaning but you are right i repeated it so much
>Compare this with "A surge of pride and hope washed over Saint Neal". Does this read better? I bet it does, but I can be wrong so I'm seriously asking for your opinion.
both are good but yours is kinda easier to read.
>Anyway, good job. I liked this. Also, the part with Marmot-Man is nice, I don't have much to point out about it.
Thanks a lot
>should have gone with the verb "Notice"
I'm afraid it's a perception verb all the same. But It's not like a capital offence, so don't worry too much.
>kinda easier to read.
The ultimate goal is absolute transparency of the prose and complete immersion. Being an ultimate goal, it's unobtainable, so strive for it without losing your way in the process.
Now I should write too...
Le Bump Did nothing wrong!
Who is LeBump?
it's just my way of bumping the thread
instead of just typing Bump, i write "Le Bump"
Come on, isn't Le Bump that french guy/gal that goes on improbable adventures? The kind that you can summarize in a short sentence but nonetheless give you the feeling that they were amazing.
Like, Le Bump on Alpha Carinae.
Le Bump, he-- As a kid, he was bitten a thirsty anon in a science lab accident--! Radioactive stuff... I don't know how it happened, but I swear to God, from that day on, he could bump the threads.
I wonder who would win, Le Bump or Bumpman?
I know The Bump, but who's Bumpman?
Who bumps the Bumpmen?
Eh well I saw him on one of those really bad and stupid superhero name threads once but forgot the link and location.
oh yeah Le Bump had many adventures and titles kek
Here are some of them:
>Le Bump: Civil War!!
>Le Bump for All Seasons!
>Le Bump and the Legend of the Tenth Bump!!
>All-Stars Le Bump
>LE BUMP: Endgame!!
>Le Bump: Into the Bump-Verse!!
thanks, i guess
"In brightest day, in blackest night, no evil shall escape my bump. Let those who worship evil's might beware my power…Le Bump's light!”
ok that was fun
>Le Bump: Into the Bump-Verse!!
This is where Le Bump meets all the other avatars: Bump-tan, The Bump, Bumpman and the others.
Special guest, Page10-tan.
Page 10-tan hasn't made a proper appearance in some time now.
He will appear after 246 more posts.
This thread has a lot of possible hooks already imo, but there's always the chance to talk about other things.
And about the Cinemaphilesmic ones, of which Page 10-tan aka The Thread Ripper is a member, where do you see them appear in a story?
I was thinking about using Belvraik for some AU shit. You know the part of the Pineapple Cake Logs with the time loop shenanigans? Imagine a story that branches from the timeline of the rest of the logs right there (because come on, they are too good to change): after Cookie and his crew get out of the time loop, they find out that there are problems in the past and that there's a cosmic anomaly in the form of a gravity well (do you know Diebuster? Yes). To get to the past, they must use the gravity well, and in doing so they summon Belvraik aka the gravity wells itself (is this plagiarism? Idk) and Earth now risks total annihilation, but there are heroes from the future and from the past to defend it.
>tl;Dr
Pineapple Cake and Belvraik, plus the plot twist of Diebuster and time travel, plus ensemble cast of potentially every /coc/ heroes.
But whatever, I would be glad if there's discussion of almost any kind in this thread, not necessarily about my fanfictions.
But what happens when the timelines collapse under the pressure of increased entropy back into one timeline? Do all alternate versions of character retain all memories, or does one of The Cinemaphilesmic Ones need to be present (since they are defined by being singular across all time lines and dimensions) to prevent a time disaster?
Technically, the crew of the Pineapple Cake discovered a new Cinemaphilesmic One when they met Herold.
I said AU because I thought the different timelines would remain just that: different timelines. Cookie and crew return at the point where they went back in time, so there's the original Cookie of the Pineapple Logs and another Cookie that took a detour in time and returned, plus another Earth that will follow a new timeline (I fricking hate physics...).
But you mentioned entropy, meaning Crackdown... maybe you're onto something...
How exotic
since the ark is now over
let me share the inspiration for some characters in this arc.
>inspirations (1/2)
Yeah, I got that kind of vibe from James.
>Inspirations 2/2
i mean Alfred is a literal rip off of The Evil Midnight Bomber Kek
[Spoiler}https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KkzptjhCkbs&t=30s&ab_channel=JasonGarland[/spoiler]
That's pretty cool reference.
(Oof. Looks like I avoided some drama this week.)
That GG thread? Yeah, they're almost always like that.
Nice pic. Do you think men with square jaws are discriminated against in the 50s since all criminals who aren't caricatures seem to have that jawline?
>Do you think men with square jaws are discriminated against in the 50s since all criminals who aren't caricatures seem to have that jawline?
Well no, because of the Lantern Jaw of Justice.
Is she rubbing her breast? Did she happen by chance to accidently hit him with her boobs?
I was going more for a tired arm support. I guess it didn't read well. Here's an alternate take, maybe it's better, (or worse) idk.
Much more readable
its great
Either way, it's cute.
Good night.
Yeah, I'm also going to bed now.
I'm not
(Or am I?)
since i don't think that I will be able to write another Greentext before the end of the week so I will continue next week.
and now as always, i want to ask you:
any questions?
any suggestions?or ideas you want to see?
any complaints?
any advice?
Something does come to mind.
How does Saint Neal feel about supervillains? Is he "they didn't do nothing" or is he "you had a gift and you pissed it away!"
Is his organization even harsher on supervillains than the superheros are? Or do they just recruit them with some bullshit and try to point them in whatever direction they like the bast they can?
>How does Saint Neal feel about supervillains? Is he "they didn't do nothing" or is he "you had a gift and you pissed it away!"
that's an interesting question because Neal has complex morality so you see :
On one hand, he might see them as a symptom of the oppression and discrimination irregulars face in society. irregulars who turn to villainy could be driven by a sense of alienation, anger, or a desire for power in a world that fears and hates them. Neal might empathize with their struggle and view them as victims of a system that pushed them toward villainy.
On the other hand, Neal has a strong sense of pride in irregulars abilities and the potential of Irregular-kind. irregular supervillains who use their powers for selfish gain or to harm others could be seen as betraying the cause and tarnishing the reputation of irregulars and the Nexus as a whole. He might see them as misguided and damaging to the irregular cause, especially if they perpetuate negative stereotypes about irregulars.
Ultimately, Neal's view would likely depend on the specific actions and motivations of the Irregular supervillains in question. He might try to recruit them to his cause, seeing their power as a valuable asset in the fight for Irregular's rights. Or he might view them as a threat to be dealt with, especially if their actions directly harm irregulars or his vision for an Irregular-dominated society.
And how does he view regular parents of an irregular?
Does he tell the irregular to forsake them or try to downplay them as much as possible without actually dismissing them? Feels like he's always on the verge of making a new, potentially horrific, enemy.
Neal's views on regular parents of Irregulars is likely to be complex and influenced by his experiences and beliefs. Here are a few possibilities (it depends on the family and irregular):
>Resentment:
Neal resents regular parents for their role in bringing an Irregular into a world that fears and discriminates against them. He could see them as part of the oppressive system that marginalizes Irregulars, especially if they are not supportive of their Irregular child.
>Manipulation:
Neal sees an opportunity to recruit Irregulars who have been rejected by their regular parents. He could offer them a sense of belonging and empowerment, exploiting their anger and alienation for his cause.
>Indifference:
Alternatively, Neal does not give regular parents much thought at all, seeing them as insignificant in the larger struggle for Irregular rights. He encourages Irregulars to focus on their own strength and the Irregular community rather than seeking validation or approval from regular society.
Regarding your second point, Neal's approach to dealing with regular parents could indeed vary. He advises Irregulars to distance themselves from unsupportive or harmful parents, encouraging them to find strength and support within the Irregular community. However, he also cautions against outright dismissal or hostility towards regular parents, recognizing that they are still family to many Irregulars.
Neal's character often distinguishes between seeking justice for Irregulars and potentially becoming a new enemy himself. He knows the dangers of pushing Irregulars away from their regular families entirely, understanding that such actions could lead to further division and conflict. Ultimately, his approach would likely be pragmatic and strategic, aiming to empower Irregulars while also considering the broader consequences of his actions.
He's still just one man. He can't have the time to give as much thought as needed to each individual on a case-by-case bias. Part of his reformations might need to be making a branch of his organization to do this for him, but that opens up even more avenues for potential disaster. Doc seems like the best candidate for it since that's what he's already doing, even if he is doing a lot of indoctrination to more radical ideologies.
Seems like he'd get blown away by someone like Willow who was presumably abandoned because of her appearance, then raised lovingly by a regular (Joe's powers don't count as an irregular since they can be taught, or so I assume).
Saint Neal would have a fricking field day in the I Know A Guy setting. And by that I mean a migraine leading to a brain aneurysm.
>He's still just one man. He can't have the time to give as much thought as needed to each individual on a case-by-case bias.
good point and this is why he asked Doc to train the new members and also Keith R. Ruiz (the college professor) to go and find the perfect candidates and influence them to join the Mouvement.
>Seems like he'd get blown away by someone like Willow who was presumably abandoned because of her appearance, and then raised lovingly by a regular
well you are kinda right but Neal will See Joe as an intruder and as a person who corrupted his daughter by turning her into a heroine.
> (Joe's powers don't count as an irregular since they can be taught, or so I assume).
also true The NMA/glowing green aura is a technique to be taught, Achieved, or passed down by a current user and not born with.techniqually in papers Marmot-man is a powerless hero
>Saint Neal would have a fricking field day in the I Know A Guy setting. And by that I mean a migraine leading to a brain aneurysm.
very true kek
So would Neal think that Marmot-Man has powers, or would he think it's a technique?
I get the feeling if he sees the green aura around Joe and Willow his first impression will be that Joe has powers and Willow really is his biological daughter with how powers are inherited.
But what does Neal think about irregulars who have regular children? Does he just think that's unfortunate and the child should always be told so? Feels like he's setting himself up for a massive cultural rebellion against his civil rebellion.
>So would Neal think that Marmot-Man has powers, or would he think it's a technique?
wait and you will see but you can say that Neal will probably think that Marmot-man got his powers and wasn't born with it which for the Nexus is the equivalent of a phony and a fraud.
>But what does Neal think about irregulars who have regular children?
basically, they tell the parents to raise them and love them as an irregular child (because they will still have some irregular gene in their DNA so the grandkids can be irregular) but if an Irregular marries a regular person well that will not be tolerated too much.
>Feels like he's setting himself up for a massive cultural rebellion against his civil rebellion.
The Nexus is a literal religious cult and some followers are ready to even give up their children and their lives for "the cause" and for "SAINT" Neal but again who knows?
Bit of a fast drop today.