I am too lazy to circle it, but the top of the waist on the viewer's left - you have the curvature of the bottom extending upwards instead of curvature of the top extending downwards. This is moronic and gives her the implication of having a fricking flesh cape like unto a locust's wings, especially when considering the rotation of her waist. Do better at thinking about the implications.
Also, the Apollo Belt (aka vegana bones) should not be so visibly defined on one side but not the other.
Stop leaning on references so much because you're completely neglected your ability to compose the changes structurally.
Disgusting animu garbage.
-Learn to draw noses.
-Learn to draw eyes.
-Learn to draw mouths.
-Learn to draw skull shapes.
-Learn to draw hair that doesn't poke out the subject's eyes.
-Learn to draw ear placements.
-Learn to draw hands.
-Learn to draw female arms.
-Learn to draw forehead to face ratio.
-Learn to frick off to an appropriate place, like Japan.
That basket ball looks fricking terrible.
How about now
Better, but the lines on it are still fricked up.
I'll try to fix them
Thanks for the advice
I drew her eating a watermelon
Dead board
Forgot the pic
Fingers need work.
Here's the reference I used
a bit scuffed around the edges for now but (you) got the spirit. i`d bust if i was in the mood.
I am too lazy to circle it, but the top of the waist on the viewer's left - you have the curvature of the bottom extending upwards instead of curvature of the top extending downwards. This is moronic and gives her the implication of having a fricking flesh cape like unto a locust's wings, especially when considering the rotation of her waist. Do better at thinking about the implications.
Also, the Apollo Belt (aka vegana bones) should not be so visibly defined on one side but not the other.
Stop leaning on references so much because you're completely neglected your ability to compose the changes structurally.
good
now draw her go to college
Nice hips.
I don't see the differences
Now?
Basketball needs work. Also wrong color. But I guess nowadays you can get different color basketballs.
>>>/ic/
Maybe there's a better board than that
it alright
Good now draw her and Valbun doing.... things.
so cute
Goth girls!
She cute. Dolphin shorts are the best.
It’s good, I’m stealing it for my oc
It's hhoott
Thank you<33
You should use references for the poses, bodies and clothes
>Thank you<33
Alright, if it wasn't obvious you are attentiongayging, now it is.
I just want to know others opinions about my art
Nice.
I can draw cute faces but not full on babes with nice bodies. Got any tips on getting better?
ahahaha y'all fapping to men with gyno
Do you take requests?
Sure
Added the shadow
Disgusting animu garbage.
-Learn to draw noses.
-Learn to draw eyes.
-Learn to draw mouths.
-Learn to draw skull shapes.
-Learn to draw hair that doesn't poke out the subject's eyes.
-Learn to draw ear placements.
-Learn to draw hands.
-Learn to draw female arms.
-Learn to draw forehead to face ratio.
-Learn to frick off to an appropriate place, like Japan.
your comics are losing to jap shit and your people are being replaced in their own countries
I like it.
same
I know this artist personally and they are an insufferable c**t
Can I get a quick rundown?
What name
Bro I don't even know him
I only post my art here stop paying attention to trolls
Do I know you lmfao??
It seems rather jejune