What do you think of this series concept? Do you want it to happen? How well would it likely do?

What do you think of this series concept? Do you want it to happen? How well would it likely do?

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  1. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I remember seeing this before. It's interesting as a concept and stands out among the usual pitches of "depressed magical girl". I'd give it a shot.

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      How the frick did Disney look at a suave dashing spy catman and not realize girls would eat it up??

      Is getting revived based on the Disney TVA threads about their future lineup

      • 2 years ago
        Anonymous

        that's pretty neat, honestly

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >"depressed magical girl"
      do you think some of those people saw how unoriginal their concept was and tried to modify it?

      • 2 years ago
        Anonymous

        please tell me this is just a joke tweet and not a real pitch

      • 2 years ago
        Anonymous

        >anyone
        no one, actually

      • 2 years ago
        Anonymous

        This one had to be a joke, jesus christ no one can be that stupid

        please tell me this is just a joke tweet and not a real pitch

        , right?

  2. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    How the frick did Disney look at a suave dashing spy catman and not realize girls would eat it up??

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      Disney doesn't like they're mature audience (amphibia, owl house) and they're trying to make they're network kid-only by removing lore shows and bringing in episodic shows (hamster & gretel, kiff, hailey's on it)
      Even IF twitter absolutely loved this pitch it'll never get picked up for the same reason they're not renewing the owl house, it's not the kind of content disney wants anymore.

      • 2 years ago
        Anonymous

        Fair enough, but I still feel like young girls would want to watch his adventures cause they find him dreamy.

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >How the frick did Disney look at a suave dashing spy catman and not realize girls would eat it up??
      Didn't you know anon? All girls are now supposed to be lesbians, or at least bi that lean heavily toward women.

  3. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    That's now how you pitch a series to a network, also:
    >Bettercartoon
    I find so funny how these gays got upset over the Ren & Stimpy reboot yet they defend stuff like Thundercats Roar, She-Ra. Animaniacs and so on

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >I find so funny how these gays got upset over the Ren & Stimpy reboot yet they defend stuff like Thundercats Roar, She-Ra. Animaniacs and so on
      I don't expect that reboot to be any good tho, it is being animated by the same people doing the cheap Adult Swim shows, I can see it looking as bad as that Beavis and Butthead movie that came out a few weeks ago

      • 2 years ago
        Anonymous

        That's now how you pitch a series to a network, also:
        >Bettercartoon
        I find so funny how these gays got upset over the Ren & Stimpy reboot yet they defend stuff like Thundercats Roar, She-Ra. Animaniacs and so on

        [...]

        >In February 2021, it was announced that HBO Max had ordered two seasons of Clone High revival series.
        >In February 2022 it was announced that the Beavis and Butt-Head revival would premiere on August 4.
        >On June 21, 2018, it was announced that a reboot series titled Daria & Jodie was one of several revival projects in development at MTV Studios, a production studio which intends to sell new series to over-the-top media services, In May 2022, it was announced that Jodie would instead be an animated film that will air on Comedy Central.
        >On August 5, 2020, it was reported that a new Ren & Stimpy reboot had been greenlit by Comedy Central (along with Daria and Beavis and Butt-Head). Though a new creative staff has been employed, Billy West was expected to return along with a few of the original series' writers. Kricfalusi will not be involved with the reboot, nor will he receive any compensation from it. The series was originally set to be produced by Nickelodeon Animation Studio, but as of October 2021, the series' production has been moved to Awesome Inc,According to West, development was postponed due to the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States, contrary to earlier rumors that the project had been cancelled,On September 14, 2021, West confirmed that he was reprising his roles as Ren and Stimpy.
        I find odd that out of all those reboots and revivals, Ren & Stimpy was the only one to piss them off

        • 2 years ago
          Anonymous

          I don't expect the reboot to have sexy girls, but I do remember one of the new crew members posting Betty Boop fanart

          • 2 years ago
            Anonymous
            • 2 years ago
              Anonymous
              • 2 years ago
                Anonymous

                So the show only just started production this year? What the frick was happening during the two years it got announced then?

              • 2 years ago
                Anonymous

                Maybe they recorded voiced remotely during that time and are now doing the animation?

              • 2 years ago
                Anonymous
              • 2 years ago
                Anonymous

                >What the frick was happening during the two years it got announced then?

                The world fricking near collapsed.

        • 2 years ago
          Anonymous

          I don't expect the reboot to have sexy girls, but I do remember one of the new crew members posting Betty Boop fanart

          John K's art repulses me. It's like he's trying so hard to be sexy that it goes back around.

          • 2 years ago
            Anonymous

            For me it's the lips that ruin it. I never cared for puffy goldfish lips to begin with, but something about how he draws them look extra bulbous and unpleasant.

            • 2 years ago
              Anonymous

              probably because anime girls and their flat lips fried your brain. Lips are great, pillowy and soft, tantalizingly ruddy with blood and life.

              • 2 years ago
                Anonymous

                Nah, I always preferred western cartoon girls without detailed lips, even before I got into anime.

              • 2 years ago
                Anonymous

                I do admit however that the lack of detailed lips was a contributing factor in me getting into anime as I got older. It wasn't the other way around.

          • 2 years ago
            Anonymous

            He can draw more "run of the mill" stuff just fine, he just chooses to draw in that style

            • 2 years ago
              Anonymous
              • 2 years ago
                Anonymous
    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >I find so funny how these gays got upset over the Ren & Stimpy reboot yet they defend stuff like Thundercats Roar, She-Ra. Animaniacs and so on
      I don't expect that reboot to be any good tho, it is being animated by the same people doing the cheap Adult Swim shows, I can see it looking as bad as that Beavis and Butthead movie that came out a few weeks ago

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >bettercartoon
      More like bittercartoon the way these guys were acting.

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      it's pretty ridiculous, especially considering john k isn't involved and they haven't even seen anything of it yet.

      • 2 years ago
        Anonymous

        Agreed

  4. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I was with it until I saw that it was an anthro cat.

  5. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Back when the #bettercartoon shit was being spammed I thought this shit was neat. Hear its going to D+ now that the network has no excuse that little girls wouldnt watch it on TV.

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      [...]

      Is getting revived based on the Disney TVA threads about their future lineup

      Based for Disney to slap themselves and picking it up obviously it will change from development pitch art but i hope they get Studio La Cachette and Flying Bark to do this if they want to keep that art direction,

  6. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    >furrybait
    >gaybait
    >anime inspired
    3 strikes and out

  7. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I really really like the idea, but the designs need to be less Blacksad somehow. Somehow. I don't know how.

  8. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    >furhomosexualry
    I'd take more girl power shit over zoophile bait

  9. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I get that it's Twitter but this sounds way too bare bones to get excited about, it's a fine concept but if that's all this dude came to the table with, yeah I see why it was rejected.

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >dude

  10. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Well first of all it's furgay garbage. Second of all it's overall a shit premise because we know the character's never actually gonna die. Classical mythology is overdone.

  11. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    remember how there was a literal general for this twitter hashtag and like 90% of the pitches posted here is the exact same shit that has been produced for years but Cinemaphile swore it was better.
    ive yet to see Cinemaphile pitch something to the extent of those tweets but i bet money if it was done in mass most of it would be garbage as well.

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      Ok.

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >but Cinemaphile swore it was better
      I remember the hashtag, but not this part. Cinemaphile was mostly mocking the featured cartoon pitches

      • 2 years ago
        Anonymous

        I distinctly recall everyone laughing/groaning at all the different variations of "brown girl in fantasy land" that got posted

        • 2 years ago
          Anonymous

          Got pics? I remember they were funny bad

          • 2 years ago
            Anonymous

            I don't have any saved from before, but fortunately the tag is still up so I screencapped some from there.

            • 2 years ago
              Anonymous

              I won't lie though, the flip eva pilots are kinda cute. Wouldn't mind watching them tongue frick each other.

            • 2 years ago
              Anonymous

              I remember there was one anon on here who was obsessed with the first pitch, and he actually made it sound pretty good. Does anyone have that summary?

              • 2 years ago
                Anonymous

                That was actually me, I'll copy-paste what I've come up with so far.
                >Hallowtown begins with Marienne, a young girl who loves Halloween and on October 31st goes to the titular Hallowtown, a Halloween themed town tourist attraction where she meets Todd (the ghost boy on the right, a bit of a coward) and Geiss (the shadow person on the left, a smug "never-my-fault" troublemaker)
                >Geiss dares Marienne to stay in the town past midnight, and despite Todd begging her not to she takes Geiss up on the challenge
                >Turns out Hallowtown only appears in the "real world" on Halloween, and then at midnight disappears until next Halloween, meaning Marienne is trapped there for a whole year
                >The series follows Marienne as she tries to survive and adapt to Hallowtown without actually becoming part of it, from finding food that she can actually eat to avoiding being exsanguinated by the vampire queen Devirra (black chick in the fourth picture), though she and a few others eventually become allies to Marienne
                >The biggest threat, however, comes from a mysterious masked figure known only as the Wraith (the harlequin looking fricker), who takes a personal interest in claiming Marienne as his own, but instead of simply killing her or eating her like the rest of Hallowtowns inhabitants, the Wraith wants to keep her alive for some nefarious purpose tied directly to her humanity (design side note, the Wraith's mask changes based on its mood, and it does so whenever something passes over its face)
                I'm considering writing a full script for the first episode, just to see if this idea functionally holds any water. I doubt highly this concept would actually take off (especially since I'm pretty sure the original artist doesn't want any constructive feedback and I'm not about to completely steal their idea).

            • 2 years ago
              Anonymous

              Some of these could potentially work, but with some changes. But most of these would be better as webcomics

        • 2 years ago
          Anonymous

          I remember that, but I've been thinking about how I could make it actually work. I still am

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      Is it true that if you pitch a show to Disney, Disney now owns the rights and you cannot pitch it to anyone else in case they reject it.

  12. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    https://twitter.com/junkmixart/status/1291152679683502085
    There's a lot more to this pitch if you guys wanna read.
    And yes, it is a bit furhomosexual.

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >a bit
      Anon please

  13. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I like the idea but it also sounds expensive given how entirely new settings need to be designed every time. So I'm not surprised it wasnt greenlit.

  14. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    She is correct, Cats are sacred to us the Italioegyptians.

  15. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    This is going to have SO MUCH gay PORN.

  16. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    It definitely has potential.

  17. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    >The Enneads
    Finally, a cartoon based on Neoplatonism, exactly what I've been waiting for.

  18. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I think it looks way too good for a cartoon made in current year. There's gotta be some catch.

  19. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I was here for the first thread about this. If I had frick you levels of money, I would give this three seasons with a dozen 40 minute episodes each and a feature length finale.

  20. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Wow gay furry shit how brave

  21. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Make the main cats jaw line not so ugly and im interested

  22. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Let's pretend it's greenlighted: what are your hopes for it?

  23. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Actually sounds like kino and I fricking hate everything.

  24. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    This is MUCH better than almost all the other pitches I've seen.

  25. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Why is it always
    >My show got turned down for X
    And never that maybe your pitch wasn't very good?

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      can't accept their product is crap
      but also because they're told by the network that the turned down show need to make adjustments, and sometimes said adjustments are so complex the network instead turns it down

  26. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    That sounds like an awesome cartoon idea! Too bad Disney only cares about stupid woke shit.

  27. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    why is everyone saying the pitch sounds somewhat interesting?
    Here is a spy guy who could die when being killed...wow, like everyone else in the entire world.
    If he still had his nine lives that would be one thing, but the pitch says the story starts after he is done to his last live, making him essentially just a regular mortal guy.

  28. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I like the whole Egyptian thing.

  29. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Looks good.

  30. 2 years ago
    Anonymous
    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      Is Osiris wearing a mask? Does he look like a jigsaw puzzle underneath?

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >Tefnut
      >Oh for the love of me, I want to die

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      I want to frick Isis

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      Teen girls with daddy issues would definitely have been into Set.

  31. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Sounds like planescape torment with cats

  32. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I kind of don't like the art style. The only one who looks nicely designed is the main orange cat and that's only because he looks very closet to Blacksad.

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      Yeah, this. Everyone else feels too generic and safe. And if this actually gets picked up they'll look even more watered down.

  33. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    apples

  34. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Sounds cool.

  35. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I have zero clue who the demographic would be for this. It wouldn't fit as an adult show but the concept isn't kid-friendly, and it doesn't even seem like something teenagers would be into unless they're already into Egyptology. This pitch just sounds like something the creator personally wants, which is fine, but unless you're someone like Genndy Tartakovsky you need to have a pitch be marketable for it to get picked up.

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >Globe-trotting action adventure show with a historical bent
      >No appeal

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      This is the mind of a Disney exec. They just don't understand people

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >young adult adventure show
      >not for kids or teenagers

      • 2 years ago
        Anonymous

        YA fiction is for people 10 to 18 but seems to be mostly discussed/complained about by people between 25-35

  36. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Needs more females

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      with big boobs and big butts

  37. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    >saving the world
    Needlessly grandiose. The protagonist's quest could've been anything and the reincarnation gimmick is interesting by itself, although I'm not sure if reincarnation was a major point in egyptian cosmology or not. Is the protagonist a god? I thought ordinary egyptian people only had an afterlife. Is the protagonist even egyptian?

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      >although I'm not sure if reincarnation was a major point in egyptian cosmology or not
      For Ra it technically is. He dies every night and rises again each morning having sailed on the river duat accompanied by several guardians. A being close enough associated with Ra could justifiably revive from death and be on topic.

  38. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Popi's Cute CUTE!

    hope they cast Boxxy as her since many anons on previous threads on Cinemaphile proposed her as her main VA and i can see it.

  39. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    Is this the way to pitch series? By posting the concept on Twitter?

    • 2 years ago
      Anonymous

      I would expect more success if you have it trending on Cinemaphile tbqh.

  40. 2 years ago
    Anonymous

    I heard Disney changed their minds and greenlighted it, but I can't find a source?

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