an original disney channel animated movie would be pretty cool. and i mean completely original, not a movie for an already existing tv show. i don’t think that’s ever been done before but i also imagine it’d be too expensive for them to care.
The Style and Tone section actively makes it clear this show had zero vision of its own did it? Execs just wanted "popular shows that sold billions" and expected it would work just with that, right? Jesus.
And I was curious to looking at this but knew it was going to be a let down, now it's almost completely a shitshow I don't even wanna touch.
yeah so obviously just picked basic sci fi animation, also nothing like any of them as not a single laugh was gotten out of me. I feel it lived off horny anons for a long time I remember the daily threads, and simping whenever you said the show was average at best.
Yeah, my sister used to work for Scott Burnett Productions and was informed that whenever pitching to Fox everything absolutely had to be phrased as "It's Like X meets Y" or else the studio execs would get confused and freak out.
Thinking this show would last three seasons was incredibly ambitious
>HAHAHAHA they planned ahead
Uhhhh.... good? Better than making up shit as you go along because you killed/redeemed everyone interesting like TGAMM.
I like how a major plot twist got spoiled in this leak but nobody even responded because literally nobody gives a shit about this show.
I thought it was pretty interesting. Maybe give people who aren't terminally online like yourself time to check out the thread? We aren't Cartoonshi's personal army, so we have no reason to mindlessly bash this show.
I mean, that's still not a bad strategy. Things can change over the course of a few years, they introduce new characters/plots/elements that effect the original idea, and so on. But its whole depended on the writer, and I'm not too confident in HOI's writers admittedly.
It's like how GRRM gave D&D and outline for Game of Thrones, and they were on point for most of the parts already covered by the books, but when they tried to finish connecting the plot points themselves, the show ended up with one of the biggest collapses in television history.
>Uhhhh.... good? Better than making up shit as you go along because you killed/redeemed everyone interesting like TGAMM.
He means just like how Moon Girl planned for 4 seasons, Disney being Disney was actively asking for this to backfire on them because it's moronic to think even more than 1 season would be possible to expect out of this shit company.
Well, for starters, there is a whole other thread about the leaks, and this thread seems to be picking up steam now that the official one is reaching bump limit.
Gonna be interesting to see when the season (series) finale drops if they keep in the AC plot twist or if they excise it since they know the show isn't getting renewed (or if it even was still planned given how different some of the other bibles are from the finished product)
[...] >HAHAHAHA they planned ahead
Uhhhh.... good? Better than making up shit as you go along because you killed/redeemed everyone interesting like TGAMM.
[...]
I thought it was pretty interesting. Maybe give people who aren't terminally online like yourself time to check out the thread? We aren't Cartoonshi's personal army, so we have no reason to mindlessly bash this show.
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They planned out one single sentence worth of plot. It's not that noteworthy.
Tbf I don't think you're meant to reveal a lot of lore and plot twists in pitch bibles
Amphibia revealed a lot in their own pitch bible as well. The stuff that didn't get revealed is the stuff that was obviously changed as the show was in development (ie Marcy mainly)
A better idea would be to make people very curious and come up with their own theories of what it would amount to. Which could of course be explained in the show if picked up.
>pitch bible doesn't even use a concept drawing of the main villain, just a fricking picture of young sheldon
i know what pitch bibles are. i know they take images to set a tone of style and personality, but the other characters at least had art of said character AND pictures of people/pre-existing dynamics as examples
i think the creators* came from a live-action sitcom background. they probably can’t draw, and i guess, didn’t know or didn’t want to pay anyone who could.
i hesitate calling them creators because this bible, to me, kinda confirms that was just a bunch of executive ideas mushed into an idea they thought would generate an audience. they failed.
Even MS Paint pitch bibles can get picked up to series. If they had a fun vision they were actually passionate about, they had no excuse not to try a scribble.
Everything feels generic and something an AI would write if you asked it to write a show bible. I know it's not because it's from 2021, but it feels that way.
It doesn't have a single original idea and simply relies on what's popular or trendy. That's evident in all the pictures. I get saying something is like X meets Y can help convey your point, but this is way overkill.
There's not an ounce of soul or any aspirations to try to make something good or unique. It's one of the worst series bibles I've ever seen... and it got a fricking show. At least it was only 1 season, but that slot could've gone to someone who aspired to make something they could be passionate about.
Show me some worse bibles then. I don't care that it references other work, thats common in bibles. It's that it does it constantly through the entire Bible, and is afraid to establish any legs of its own to stand on. There's also several instances of telling rather that readers coming to the conclusion themselves by reading the descriptions. It can't effectively communicate that these are "real characters" so it has to outright tell us that they are, and if thats the case, they absolutely aren't.
Everything feels generic and something an AI would write if you asked it to write a show bible. I know it's not because it's from 2021, but it feels that way.
I feel there is something you really hate about this show and its pitch bible that nobody else here is seeing.
Hurry up and say Andrea's dad's name so I can figure out you're just Murrlogic.
>You just hate it because alterative motives or something personal!
No anon, I'm pointing out why its shit because it's shit. Nothing more, nothing less. Sorry if you like this dreck but that's my thought on it.
1 month ago
Anonymous
>alternative motives
You mean ulterior motives I take it, moron?
1 month ago
Anonymous
starting to realize every critic of this show is stupid as shit
Hailey was literally too intelligent to win
1 month ago
Anonymous
>You made a typo! l gotcha.
If that's the best you've got then I suspect you're triggered over my opinion. Perhaps you are connected to the show and I hurt your feelings?
1 month ago
Anonymous
there are several people here being critical of this show, its just their criticism is a lot less moronic than "lol its shit" and "lol did things pitch bibles do all the time!"
sorry it took a Cinemaphile thread for you to realize you aren't as smart as you've been told all your life.
1 month ago
Anonymous
But I explained why the Bible was shit. What you haven't done is explain why you thought it was good or give me a Bible that's worse than this. >lol did things pitch bibles do all the time!
What the frick are you even talking about?
Scott's original design looks a lot better. Doesn't look like some random 40 year old Asian man acting like a teenager. Original Hailey I'm on the fence about, she looks cuter but a little too "CalArtsy"
I really like the style in the pilot. It's so similar to the actual show's style but doesn't trigger the uncanny valley feeling I get from the actual show. The pilot made me watch to watch the show. The first episode on YouTube reminded me why I don't watch the show.
Hailey's On it! (I Will NOT Kiss Scott Federman) Pitch: https://litter.catbox.moe/2nu30m.pdf
Hailey's On it! (I Will NOT Kiss Scott Federman) Pitch 2: https://litter.catbox.moe/kz71q6.pdf
Hailey's On it! Pilot: https://litter.catbox.moe/1lzp93.mp4
Just in time as the series dies.
Should of just been a TV special.
an original disney channel animated movie would be pretty cool. and i mean completely original, not a movie for an already existing tv show. i don’t think that’s ever been done before but i also imagine it’d be too expensive for them to care.
Glad they changed those googley eyes.
The Style and Tone section actively makes it clear this show had zero vision of its own did it? Execs just wanted "popular shows that sold billions" and expected it would work just with that, right? Jesus.
And I was curious to looking at this but knew it was going to be a let down, now it's almost completely a shitshow I don't even wanna touch.
yeah so obviously just picked basic sci fi animation, also nothing like any of them as not a single laugh was gotten out of me. I feel it lived off horny anons for a long time I remember the daily threads, and simping whenever you said the show was average at best.
That's just how pitching goes.
Yeah, my sister used to work for Scott Burnett Productions and was informed that whenever pitching to Fox everything absolutely had to be phrased as "It's Like X meets Y" or else the studio execs would get confused and freak out.
>Season 3
HAHAHAHAHAHA
Wow was that a long shot. Them planning to reveal that in a theoretical season three is some really bad planning.
No it isn't
Most shows write all the eggs in the season one basket
Figures the one time they plan things out, the show gets cancelled
It is when most shows from Disney aren't guaranteed a third season.
Thinking this show would last three seasons was incredibly ambitious
I like how a major plot twist got spoiled in this leak but nobody even responded because literally nobody gives a shit about this show.
>HAHAHAHA they planned ahead
Uhhhh.... good? Better than making up shit as you go along because you killed/redeemed everyone interesting like TGAMM.
I thought it was pretty interesting. Maybe give people who aren't terminally online like yourself time to check out the thread? We aren't Cartoonshi's personal army, so we have no reason to mindlessly bash this show.
They planned out one single sentence worth of plot. It's not that noteworthy.
"we won't find out the real answer until season 3" is code for "we haven't actually come up with anything yet, we'll think of something in five years"
I mean, that's still not a bad strategy. Things can change over the course of a few years, they introduce new characters/plots/elements that effect the original idea, and so on. But its whole depended on the writer, and I'm not too confident in HOI's writers admittedly.
It's like how GRRM gave D&D and outline for Game of Thrones, and they were on point for most of the parts already covered by the books, but when they tried to finish connecting the plot points themselves, the show ended up with one of the biggest collapses in television history.
Yeah, I’ve been hearing that Kevin Yee’s episodes are mid.
>Uhhhh.... good? Better than making up shit as you go along because you killed/redeemed everyone interesting like TGAMM.
He means just like how Moon Girl planned for 4 seasons, Disney being Disney was actively asking for this to backfire on them because it's moronic to think even more than 1 season would be possible to expect out of this shit company.
Still getting shitcanned in three weeks
just like cartoonshi's account was
Literally who
Kicking a show like this when its down seems shitty
It wasnt the best but its not something i feel deserves the downfall it got either
>Kicking a show like this when its down seems shitty
That's all people have been doing for two years with owl show and molly
>Maybe give people who aren't terminally online like yourself time to check out the thread?
Been six hours now, still not a whole lot of attention.
Well, for starters, there is a whole other thread about the leaks, and this thread seems to be picking up steam now that the official one is reaching bump limit.
Gonna be interesting to see when the season (series) finale drops if they keep in the AC plot twist or if they excise it since they know the show isn't getting renewed (or if it even was still planned given how different some of the other bibles are from the finished product)
>AC is the bad guy
Really going for the most boring possible option huh
Tbf I don't think you're meant to reveal a lot of lore and plot twists in pitch bibles
Amphibia revealed a lot in their own pitch bible as well. The stuff that didn't get revealed is the stuff that was obviously changed as the show was in development (ie Marcy mainly)
Molly all but gave away the final plot twist in its pitch bible, which was openly posted during the first season.
o lol nvm then
It did give away the main villain, which is ostensibly meant to be a twist
A better idea would be to make people very curious and come up with their own theories of what it would amount to. Which could of course be explained in the show if picked up.
So Hailey doesn’t even need the list and could just simply beat AC’s head in with a brick
>pitch bible doesn't even use a concept drawing of the main villain, just a fricking picture of young sheldon
i know what pitch bibles are. i know they take images to set a tone of style and personality, but the other characters at least had art of said character AND pictures of people/pre-existing dynamics as examples
i think the creators* came from a live-action sitcom background. they probably can’t draw, and i guess, didn’t know or didn’t want to pay anyone who could.
i hesitate calling them creators because this bible, to me, kinda confirms that was just a bunch of executive ideas mushed into an idea they thought would generate an audience. they failed.
Even MS Paint pitch bibles can get picked up to series. If they had a fun vision they were actually passionate about, they had no excuse not to try a scribble.
didn't it leak at the very beginning of the series hype???
This was the canon ending anyway:
https://exhentai.org/g/2730404/a5e357bfe5/
This looks AI generated.
It's text
And the text looks AI generated.
How?
Everything feels generic and something an AI would write if you asked it to write a show bible. I know it's not because it's from 2021, but it feels that way.
I genuinely want to know who at disney saw fricking gender bent rick and morty and was like "yep, this deserves a series"
It doesn't have a single original idea and simply relies on what's popular or trendy. That's evident in all the pictures. I get saying something is like X meets Y can help convey your point, but this is way overkill.
There's not an ounce of soul or any aspirations to try to make something good or unique. It's one of the worst series bibles I've ever seen... and it got a fricking show. At least it was only 1 season, but that slot could've gone to someone who aspired to make something they could be passionate about.
>t's one of the worst series bibles I've ever seen
you are either underage or exaggerating badly
im not kanner's severe autistic like you so them making a reference to rick & morty doesnt bug me at all
Show me some worse bibles then. I don't care that it references other work, thats common in bibles. It's that it does it constantly through the entire Bible, and is afraid to establish any legs of its own to stand on. There's also several instances of telling rather that readers coming to the conclusion themselves by reading the descriptions. It can't effectively communicate that these are "real characters" so it has to outright tell us that they are, and if thats the case, they absolutely aren't.
I feel there is something you really hate about this show and its pitch bible that nobody else here is seeing.
Hurry up and say Andrea's dad's name so I can figure out you're just Murrlogic.
No cause if he was Murrlogic he would’ve brought up AC or Hailey’s Mom
>You just hate it because alterative motives or something personal!
No anon, I'm pointing out why its shit because it's shit. Nothing more, nothing less. Sorry if you like this dreck but that's my thought on it.
>alternative motives
You mean ulterior motives I take it, moron?
starting to realize every critic of this show is stupid as shit
Hailey was literally too intelligent to win
>You made a typo! l gotcha.
If that's the best you've got then I suspect you're triggered over my opinion. Perhaps you are connected to the show and I hurt your feelings?
there are several people here being critical of this show, its just their criticism is a lot less moronic than "lol its shit" and "lol did things pitch bibles do all the time!"
sorry it took a Cinemaphile thread for you to realize you aren't as smart as you've been told all your life.
But I explained why the Bible was shit. What you haven't done is explain why you thought it was good or give me a Bible that's worse than this.
>lol did things pitch bibles do all the time!
What the frick are you even talking about?
This is not the pitch bible but a writers' guide, the pitch had no original art and all the characters were white.
Scott's original design looks a lot better. Doesn't look like some random 40 year old Asian man acting like a teenager. Original Hailey I'm on the fence about, she looks cuter but a little too "CalArtsy"
https://twitter.com/owlphibia/status/1783698777393582358
Here is more animation from the test pilot
they shouldve keep Hailey's green eyes
I really like the style in the pilot. It's so similar to the actual show's style but doesn't trigger the uncanny valley feeling I get from the actual show. The pilot made me watch to watch the show. The first episode on YouTube reminded me why I don't watch the show.
it looks worse
they have potato heads
>dtva is in such shambles that the only “new” content we have is old show bibles
I like all these shows and I liked Hailey's On It so I'd say they did a decent job
I'm on it!
I miss Kristine
This week's episode is her return right?
The fat instagram aw ? She is the worst character of this fricking show and one of them is a farting flamingo.
Can someone upload the pitch bible?
Hailey's On it! (I Will NOT Kiss Scott Federman) Pitch: https://litter.catbox.moe/2nu30m.pdf
Hailey's On it! (I Will NOT Kiss Scott Federman) Pitch 2: https://litter.catbox.moe/kz71q6.pdf
Hailey's On it! Pilot: https://litter.catbox.moe/1lzp93.mp4
Ah shit they all 404'd...
Re-upload them.