Or /coc/ thread if that's what you look for in the catalog.
Wiki:
https://the-conservatory.fandom.com/wiki/The_/co/nservatory_Wiki
Past threads:
https://desuarchive.org/co/search/text/the-conservatory%20wiki/type/op/
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>How does this work?
>It works like a community toy chest. In the /coc/ threads you are free to post whatever ideas/settings/characters you want, but you have to be OK with other people playing with them (tweaking them, putting them in stories, using them for things, etc.)
>There's no guarantee that what you post will catch on either.
>If the OC you are posting is YOURS for something you are personally doing, then it would go to the "How is your webcomic?" threads.
>If you just want feedback on an OC of yours, then it would go in the "donut steel" threads or drawthreads.
If the thread dies suddenly or you still want to discuss something when there's no thread:
https://boards.plusCinemaphile/coc/
Last time:
-New pics
-Violet Vice: Master in Disguise
-Ladybug ideas
-Crackdown discussion
-Progress on the Highway Robbery comic
-Progress on THEFAPV comic
-NTH story boarding
Thread died early. Second attempt:
-Extensive NTH discussion
-GG's birthday and new GG pics/comic pages
-More of the same as the first thread attempt
-Other stuff I didn't mention
Why not have Violet Vice as the OP? Will it attract bad crowds?
I wasn't entirely sure if she's a personal OC or not.
Civvies or supersuits?
If civvies, then are they attending any of the same classes?
Civvies, since supersuits is a bit weird to get between both of em. Also iirc Arthur is like a drop-out.
So... Physics classes?
They might find some common ground in discussing theoretical physics that they both know are no longer theoretical and have already been made applicable.
It works. They might even study together so that Arthur's interest keeps being fueled in order to prevent him from falling back into the same chasm of apathy that caused him to drop out previously.
This might also serve as a set-up for some interesting conversations since Arthur is less of a "science hero/mad genius" style of smart character and more of a "ponderer/scholar" type, so to speak.
Are they both trying to keep their identities secret from each other while also both trying to prove to the other that this theory is not a theory and has been successfully applied?
I don't have the knowledge to write such a scenario. I can only image it as
"No, if you [do the math like this] then it's totally possible!"
"As if! The models show that would cause a massive collapse almost instantly!"
"Only if you're using models based on these outdated equations, you have to supplement [this equation with that equation] and then it works."
Eh, Arthur probably wouldn't get this heated over a physics debate since
1) He doesn't pride himself on being a "physics guy" or a "science guy"
2) He'd probably be scared shitless of alienating one of the few (in his mind) people who tolerate his presence
So he'd probably try to disarm to situation by daring her to prove it by the next time they hang out or "agree to disagree".
In a way, Arthur is like a toned down version of Victor von Doom without his compulsive need of proving himself: sure, he might not be as knowledgable in theoretics as Richards, as good of an engineer as Stark and as powerful of a magician as Strange, but he doesn't really need to be since he has all three beat by simplynot having tunnel vision when it comes to their fields of expertise.
I really don't know how to work with him.
Is he the kind of guy who will just sit there alone in a room and stew in his own anxiety and depression? That sort of person can only function if there are people around who he can't intimidate who will drag him out of being alone. It wouldn't make him any less miserable, but it would make him feel less miserable at least for a few hours.
>Is he the kind of guy who will just sit there alone in a room and stew in his own anxiety and depression? That sort of person can only function if there are people around who he can't intimidate who will drag him out of being alone. It wouldn't make him any less miserable, but it would make him feel less miserable at least for a few hours.
The major thing about Arthur is that he actually wants to change as a person.
He doesn't want to bow down to life's circumstances and rot alive in his bubble of insecurities, at some level he understands that all the shit that's actively making him miserable is all in his head and that his fear of people is laregly based on the VERY warped perception of others and himself.
Sure, he may sometimes fall into his old habits, but that's why the positive outside influence is so important - so that he can receive a little push that would remind him that work he puts in isn't all pointless.
You can even extend this theme to his alter-ego:
His ability's source is literally the metaphysical concept of destruction itself and his upbringing has all tenets of a supervillain backstory, but he still chooses to do good, even if in a somewhat unconventional way.
Ultimately, Arthur's character is all about taking strides towards a person you actually want to be in this life instead of sitting on your ass and using circumstances of life as a justification for inaction.
I think you need to pick a place to start his story at.
The character changes, got it. But that's not helpful in writing him unless you know where/when the character is because they're actually a dozen different characters who are slightly different each story to the next.
Does his story start with him as the wretch, picking a fight with the hero JackHammer because he projects all of his insecurities and hatred of people onto him? Or does it start later on when he's in a better headspace?
>because they're actually a dozen different characters who are slightly different each story to the next
I don't see it like that: a major lifestyle change based on self-improvement almost always comes in the form of several incremental ones.
You don't really have to put much focus on the fact that he made progress, just have him speak up a bit louder than he would previously, something of that nature.
I understand that it's probably a tall order, considering that he isn't even really the story's focus, but still.
As for what point he should start out at:
I can suggest another Cinemaphile project (albeit not a Cinemaphile one) that more or less encapsulates the kind of mindset he'd start off with, give it a try if you have the time:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LU0agHKd3oU
You can also read Onani Master Kurosawa if you have no problems with Cinemaphile, another great "coming of age" story.
Aside from that though: timid, prone to assuming the worst, tries to avoid head-on conflict if it concerns only him (he blows off his steam as Crackdown).
>Conception of Decay?
Entropy, but yes.
Arthur's power was always intended to be more conceptual rather than having it circumvent any one physical law in particular, which is why it seemingly has so many potential uses,
Violet is cute
I'm in for fantasizing this character.
If the fishnets are sharpied on, how much of the rest of her attire is faked?
She looks cuter when wearing large glasses
Here is another version
Dunno, but her 2 piece looks real to me.
Could've been electrical tape.
True, or black cloth but electrical tape sounds an enjoyable option.
Alright everybody, let's get on with it then.
I wonder if how marley and crackdown just get to talking to one another instead of being awkward.
Either Marley would have to take initiative as a slightly more socilaly adjusted person or Lila would have to pitch in and goad both of them into talking with one another.
>then are they attending any of the same classes?
Funny thing, even after all this time I'm not really sure what kind of degree Arthur should get.
I know that I've said that he secretly takes interest in fine arts and such, but I seriously can't imagine him striving for anything in the humanitarian field, especially anything related to law or political science.
Right now the two options I consider the most are math or theoretical physics, both of which have classes that would overlap with Marley's.
>Arthur is like a drop-out
He is, but the crux of his character progression is him getting reinstated via the medical leave of absence.
I kinda like the style of Arthur's act to push on and make himself take life head on, and being given a chance to go back to school gives him a sort of path that could give him a satsifiying future.
Also he's utilizing a SCP-Style ability? Conception of Decay?
Another possible scenario I came up for these two shortly after the last thread died.
>Lila makes a very obvious and overt move on Arthur, the one that even he can't misinterpret/play dumb over
>Arthur freaks the frick out and gets out in a hurry, leaving Lila confused and concerned
>Arthur racks his brain trying to figure out why a girl he barely knows would want to put out for him
>his malignant brain immediately assumes the worst and Arthur becomes convinced that she was offering him a pity frick so that he wouldn't kill himself, which kind of emotionally devastates him
This is supposed to be early on in a story.
Maybe this can even be the event that makes Lila reconsider hitting on him in that post about them I made at the tail end of last week's thread instead of her getting cold feet out of the blue.
What a sad sack! I'm not sure Lila would be able to work out why he reacted like that, which would certainly give her pause before teasing him again.
>"Boob Wars"
Starting to sound like Breast Quest in here.
Very cute!
>I'm not sure Lila would be able to work out why he reacted like that
Well, we established that she's an empathetic enough of an individual to be able to surmise that Arthur is scared of casually displaying intimacy for whatever reason and that talking to Marley might give her food for thought, not only as an introvert, but maybe also as someone who keeps waiting for the "right one" to show up in their life.
Maybe this exact confusion is something that would only motivate her further into trying to understand him, not as a potential bedfellow, but as a human being, something that would be pretty important for a more romantically involved relationship that's being layed out for these two.
Women often do love a nice enigmatic "I can fix him" puzzle, it's true.
>a character who's symbol is a heart wants to fix character who's symbol is a crack
george_lucas_poetry.jpg
But I'm still interested in ways that Arthur can prop her up in turn.
Despite his rough exterior, he's a pretty empathetic person as well, so it would be pretty nice to see him providing support to Lila in her little moments of weakness.
One of the things I don't remember mentioning about Arthur is that, despite his social awkwardness, he's surprisingly adept at reading people (something that he uses to his full advantage as Crackdown).
I wouldn't be surprised that Lila sometimes exaggerates her usual beaming persona so that people around her wouldn't be worried even if it's not how she really feels at the moment (I'd be seriously surprised if she doesn't feel considerable amount of pressure because of things like studies or her parents), so maybe Arthur would be able to pick up on that.
Or maybe I'm misreading her character and she breezes through all that stuff with little effort, I dunno.
Lila's basically "Local co-ed wants to be an art hoe but her parents won't let her." It's why her high school look was so different from her college one, she wanted to rock and roll all night and party ev-er-y day but her parents finally convinced her they needed an heir to inherit the company. This is probably why partying is one of her main ways to de-stress.
>this is probably why partying is one of her main ways to de-stress
But that doesn't mean that she would not want to talk about what's happening in her life every one in a while, right?
Even Lila might need a "Lila" from time to time.
On a related note, it's funny how Lila will basically be handed Carver Medical someday while the only two things that can possibly result from Arthur interacting with his father's old money empire are the complete destruction or the hostile takeover of it.
No bugdoodles this week
Lila isn't much for venting, but she does appreciate a shoulder to lean on. Even if she's gotta bend waaaaay down to lean on it, like Marley's.
>a shoulder to lean on
That's what I was referring to in a broader sense, it doesn't necessarily have to be verbal.
From the previous thread
>Speaking of wiki page factoids, Ma'am's mentions her boob potion is called Bimbonium. Maybe rather than making Ladybug more intelligent, it makes her ditzy, so the bit with her allies trying to cure her becomes a comedic sequence of her freaking out and awkwardly trying to escape her friends in her new top-heavy form. A BE story probably works best with a humorous bent.
If Ladybug's breasts are more bigger like Golden Girl then maybe, but now its in the right size that her intelligence can handle. Why do you think I had the idea of Ma'm Aries stealing a new formula & kidnapped the scientist to make the improved Bimbonium? I was thinking with the improved Bimbonium that was made can give a person different skills & abilities based on the breasts size, but sometimes there are side effects to gaining such abilities. While Ladybug's breasts did make her more smart what I was thinking is that she's starting to become slightly stubborn or mad. Maybe something akin to a level 1 autism. If it expands more then it would make her more ditzy, or something serious. She would have to figure out sooner or later, bug it would be the moment she might have regret not taking the counter-agent & find a way to maintain her new form & control it without losing her mentality
Her breasts size so far has so far manage to allow her to keep control of her abilities, & improved her intelligence, but anymore would be lethal to her. For humour I thought maybe Ladybug would unintentionally beat someone with her breasts. Just slamming them in the face hard until their teeth fell out
This of course would lead to the conflict that woukd take place. Think "Boob Wars", were the new & improved Bimbonium formula has manage to make it to every villain & gain powerful abilities, with the biggest boob-sized villain being the most dangerous, but also the most dumbest. Also their gigantic boobs would kill a person just by smothering them
>If Ladybug's breasts are more bigger like Golden Girl
I think it be cool if there was an alternate versions of LL from another universe has a very mature and developed figure but she have a different personality. Either of them will go to there universe and the explain what it's like to have or not have a body like the other.
bump
How's the new job?
Pretty good. Nice people. Great benefits. I'm happy with it so far.
yeah it does look pretty red here.
Glad to hear it.
Carrot top BB
The question is, how old is Lila?
The wiki says "late teens to early twenties".
Old enough to be in college.
How long has she been roommates with Marley?
I'm gonna guess about 20.
12 years, IRL anyway. Maybe 2 in universe.
Nice. Feels like Fistress would fit in with the Vixen Six.
>fit in
Yes, she would fit that into their evil behinds, for hers is the fist of JUSTICE.
I mean aesthetically. Feels like they could be her rogues. Though I guess that's the same as saying "those designs look gapeable"
and if she didnt fit, she would just use more lube
JUSTICE brand lube.
Man, she predates that Jim Gorden meme, yet could embody it if someone desired her to do so.
If someone draws the women "juicy"(?) enough and aesthetically of course you'll group them together.
OK, goodnight everyone.
>If someone draws the women "juicy"(?) enough and aesthetically of course you'll group them together.
I dunno, Skathi and Brianna are plenty "juicy" but they have a different sort of vibe about them.
Sleep well.
randomly picked this character from the wiki for my warmup
Oh damn, I haven't seen new Fistress art in a while.
It's really nice!
Your artstyle looks familiar.
yeah, i used to be a regular in these threads. helped create Chicken Divine.
cant wait to see it
Yeah, those Vixen Six pics you did are nice.
Someone was talking about drawing a Chicken Divine comic some years back, but only one test panel ever came of that I think. I don't think that was you though.
You know I just had a funny idea of a character named Fried Chicken Man, like some kind of dude whose made out of hardened and hot fried chicken. I kinda want to see em and CD be a "Bird" couple.
Sounds like King Tobacco.
This makes me think of those stories of a soldier being saved from a bullet by a bible, notebook or flask that they had in their pocket and making a suit of armor with a bunch of them
But instead it's cigarette packs.
Or it sounds like he'd be considered a type of zombie.
Nice
Do you think she ever uses her fist on any villians deemed NSFW or would it be strictly SFW for Cinemaphile?
Grabbing some tacos, will draw something when I return
Lefthandblack I think it's The name.
That's probably right.
It does remind me of the artist.
Imma sleep for 8-10 hours. Might work on something JackHammer related when I wake up. If others have stuff they want to share, it’d be nice to see when I come back
I'd need to dig out my notes on what story I was planning to write next with Jack, but I was still waiting on the second part of the I2Eye plot to be written before I committed to Blessing in Disguise.
cutiepies
I haven't seen you in a while mang
u missed me?
I don't think i saw you in the last thread.
why are they not holding hands at that moment? why must you tease me, anon?
Why not (You) draw them holding hands
Is this lewd enough for ya
Cute
Is there a women equivalent of metrosexuality?
Being a tomboy?
What makes for appealing comics scenes or panel?
Especially in terms of securing sales.
Maybe like
Millions
Supermans or one piece. Those kinds. Or just enough to float.
What are they key ingredients, when placed against those numbers?
Other than tremd maybe, how do you make your material, elements and so on, achieve the sales?
Calling it but-
Fred- Arthur
Lila- Daphne
Velma- Marley
Shaggy- NTH
Ok we gettin the gang together now
>almost every episode has NTH fleeing from investigating weird spooky shit because he stereotypically hates ghosts
>"gee gang, I wonder where this trap door leads to?"
>NTH: "AWW HELL NAH"
Fred is quite literally almost a complete opposite of Arthur.
But I guess it has some comedic value, like him clocking the "monster" with a right hook moment he first jumps the gang instead of doing a chase sequence
So who is Scooby in this scenario?
And I'm surprised it isn't NTH given that one porn parody.
postin progress.
Ooo, bigger progress.
Interesting coloring methods in panel one.
Cool art.
I like it
Very colorful
Guess they found out you were posing on the Internet Hate Machine and banned you for pre-emptive wrongthing lmao
Abandon SCP stuff entirely and make your own original content to fill in the parts of whatever story you wanted to tell that used that stuff.
The last thing I remember hearing about scp is that the troony homestuck satellite author openly celebrates the fact that Metokur has cancer and others in the community actively defend it because of "muh harassment".
From this alone, I can tell it didn't get any better from 4 years ago.
Frick them.
>Jim
>alt-right
You're so obviously underage it actually hurts.
So am I.
Literally every post you make reads like it was made by a 14 y/o and interest in things like scp and roblox isn't helping your case.
If this is (You)
than I was agreeing with you.
Ah sorry, the "he" kind of threw me off.
Actually I'm out of the loop on this, but I'm sorry for that and I do not wish to be hear anything on this then.
You've already said that someone deserves to be made fun of for having oncological disease for being a heckin problematic chud.
I suggest quitting twitter.
>SCP
I know this sounds stupid but I don't understand SCPs is it public domain or who owns them?
Um kinda on the same boat as you but I think it's best to not care.
>same boat
Wouldn't surprise me if there is a SCP as a boat. Bet you they got more shit than Pokemon.
a fictional secret organization that collects immoral creatures know as the SCP. That the best I could describe it.
They were referring to the stuff about the wiki itself and all.
Basically I think no one owns thems, but they are technically some public domain-y kind of shit?
No one
But plenty have tried to claim ownership in different countries
There was a big hubbub a few years ago when an fan artist of it in russian tried to claim the rights to it
i always had a soft spot for Vixen Six.
And you draw them looking very soft.
Nice. Wish I can slap that ass. So damn gorgeous!
If you never had a story, then it will be even easier to abandon the SCP content in favor of your own.
You have to think about what kind of story you want to tell and why you want to tell it. Be it for your own entertainment or the entertainment of others.
You see that's kinda funny: I don't know if I can make a story and I wonder if the SCP content was just there to help me out or something.
Also I want a story about Jeremy Reiner, a 13 year old autist that can't speak, but has Ergokinesis. Aka energy manipulation.
I don't actually have anything outside of that for him other meeting hot women and then maybe some giant guy. Really it feels like I jump to a conclusion or something? It's hard with me and all.
Maybe I might need help?
From this i can't help but thing in a ironic way that he kinda is like Arthur, it's funny for a little bit, but after that it bothers me if I made a unintentional unoriginal idea.
waddup /coc/
Waz dis?
A dead idea.
I don't think I've seen that particular pic before though.
Yeah, that's because I just drew it.
Then I say the other statement of it being a dead project is false.
No, it is. I just like drawing her every now and then..
>puts his hands behind his head like he's been caught by the police
Well…
Not quite.
Squish that Lil.
All you need to know is to squish that Lil.
We always squish that Lil.
...Does Lila need a bodyguard..
Nah, it's fine.
Arthur's face just does it sometimes in response to an intense emotion that he doesn't process all that often.
A bit of a "neurophysiological quirk", so to speak.
Wouldn't Lila's friends be concerned? Actually Lila is still friends with her exes.
Eh, he doesn't make that kind of face often, not when he's not Crackdown anyway.
It's not like he'll keep doing it everytime Lila shows him affection anyway, at some point he's bound to get used to it.
Also, it might not be apparent, but in that picture his heart is beating like he got intravenously injected with a can of redbull, cut his some slack.
On a related note, I actually wanted to communicate the feeling of desperation in Arthur's eyes, but he just ended up looking psychotic
Oh! Ok, that’s more understandable.
Well, it ended up working regardless, even if in a somewhat different way, considering that out of the characters that inspired Arthur's creation, about four of them share a theme of being obsessed with a blond woman.
Five, if you count Jacket from Hotline Miami, but I don't think he was "obsessed", per se, or at least not with her.
brainsquito
Does it suck brains?
Injects his mind into a strong host to control
So it blows minds, not sucks?
He can suck brains if he only wants to eat them, usually want to keep the brain of a good host
Shake your tail, Shark Lass!
Wonder what they're jamming out to?
How would Jack interact with each of them? Would he also join the dance?
I’ve begun doodling Atomic Devil. For now I have my own personal vision, but if others want to pitch him with their ideas and designs, I’d be happy to hear them!
I don't know if he'd join the dance or not.
Does he have rhythm?
He’s got incredibly sharp instincts and he’s an athlete, so maybe
I think he'd end up making a new dance by accident trying to mimic a dance.
If he walks without rhythm, he won't attract the worm. Jury's still out on the bug.
Greetings anons, and as in every thread, I'm pitching my idea for this week, enjoy!
>Lana and Lenny
>Story:
a Teal colored Fox with two heads and a lanky body (their body is 55% female and 45% male) , they try to live their life while being the unnatural being they are.
it's like Catdog with just more adult-themed jokes and plots ofc
(and I was inspired by the Wagie dog's short from adult swim https://files.catbox.moe/ethu5e.png)
>characters :
>Lana:a hyperactive Intelligent woman with a little body insecurity and social awkwardness,she likes to control their body most of the time and she loves her brother more than anything
>Lenny: a chill dude with very good social skills but not very bright in mind which makes him the perfect pairing to his sister
> Their interactions:
>Lana wakes up in the bed
>she yawns a little and then notices some crumbs all over the bed
>"Lenny did you eat snacks while i was sleeping!!" she says with an annoyed tone
>Lenny wakes up and sees his sister's mad facial expression
>"oh hi sis.....eh yeah i had a small midnight snack",
>"i told you that we are on a diet,i need to look good in the new bikini that i bought!"
>"Wait you bought a new bikini?! i'm not gonna wear a bikini are you insane sister?!"
>"i told you that one week when i asked if you prefer a bikini or a one-piece...."
>"i thought you were talking about my taste in women!"
>"Why would i ask you that you fricking idiot"
>They get up from bed and go to the bathroom
>they are a Teal colored fox with two heads and lanky body
>Lana Uses the right arm to do her makeup and Lenny uses the left arm to shave his beard
>"did you hear about what happened to Sally?" Lana asks
>"what?"
>"she and Mark celebrated their anniversary in Italy..."
>" Good for them.....oh, don't worry you will find the right person for you sis ,just wait"
>"Yeah yeah i know,let's just go to work and don't talk about this"
>They go to work with a custom-made suit
thanks and see you next week
But who would hire both of them for the same position?
well they get paid as one person so when you think about it it's good for the employer and bad for them
having two people doing the job of one person and getting paid as one person
I thought one would be doing desk job stuff while the other tried to be the custodian at the same time.
Ghost anybody?
morning bump
good morning, sir
I made this character recently and would love some ideas to make them more interesting
They're essentially a burger mascot/delivery driver and part time assassin - I liked the idea of maybe other assassins worked for other food chains and acted as possible antagonists both in deliveries and marks
They turn criminals into burgers.
A KFC Parody Mascot that’s actually the head of a Secret Intelligence Agency, bonus points if all of the Agents are Chicken themed.
KFC-like head, four captains themed after the McDonald's nugget shapes complete with weapons
>Agent Ball Buster
>Agent Bell Bottoms
>Agent Bonecrusher
>Agent Bootlicker
Patty Wheels, not Patty Wagon?
I've known people that tied the burger with an egg on it
Never done it myself but doesn't seem like it would add much to the flavor
the runny yolk really adds to a burger, it's hard to describe
Extra protein!
Unprompted piece of Crackdown lore: Arthur was an agnostic for most of his life, but lately he's been willing to reconsider his position on that since... you know, one of his rogues is a literal demon.
i posted this in the drawthread before realizing this was a more suitable place
i zoned out listening to an emplemon video while dicking around in ms paint and accidentally created a furry OC
No this is not a lackidaisy OC,
nucky thompson (from boardwalk empire) was on my mind for the clothes, I just really like vintage suits and stuff like that.
I like him and wanna draw more of him
character profile:
>freelance professional gangster, specializes in tying up loose ends and making evidence disappear
>not even necessarily from the 1920s, he just wears suits everyday because he's too autistic to understand any other kind of fashion
>quiet and generally unfazed but not reserved about his feelings
>enjoys listening to sarah vaughan https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fDePdW8aP60
>introverted
>not terribly interested in money, power, or prestige, lives as quietly and comfortably as the gangster life will let him
>mostly asexual, but touch-starved, and most desires intimacy from bigger, more masculine men
>deadpan sense of humour, doesn't have a "tell" for when he's joking instead of speaking normally
>loves scritches and having his hair fondled
I've never drawn any furry art before, or any standalone OCs, this is my first time and honestly this put a big smile on my face so i might do it more often
Reminds me a little of The Cat's Pajamas, if only because he's also well dressed cat.
What does she do, /coc/?
Fights the forces of Midnight Snackers.
She toasts in a French manner
I'm working on a drawing of Eclipsa, but I keep getting burnt out before she can be finished. Anyone else get that?
I get that a lot, so the things I do are half-assed which I'll end up hating at the end.
Same, but with literally everything in my life, not just drawing
I would give you a hug if I could anon.
I am trying to not half ass anything anymore. I want to full ass.
good night
Ok here's a crazy Idea. Ladybug, BUT tall!
The horror!
How would Jack Prime look?
Well, Ladybug Prime is a clone created by Goliath or something IIRC? So maybe egotist that he is, a Goliath-made Jack clone would be small and Snivley-esque.
You should be asking what does Evilverse Jack look like.
>Evilverse
What's the gist of it again, in terms of basic worldbuilding elements?
I might have some ideas related to what the Evilverse Arthur would be like.
An eldritch thing nudged a few events in the distant past the caused a lot of calamity much later.
https://the-conservatory.fandom.com/wiki/The_Evilverse
>eldritch
Seems like an easy premise to write the Braun family involvement.
But I'll leave it for later, I think. Way too much mainverse stuff in my head at the moment.
>What's the gist of it again, in terms of basic worldbuilding elements?
In the "main" Cinemaphileverse, an elder god tried to corrupt a Fae queen and use her to control the course of history, but was defeated by Skathi. In the Evilverse, he was never defeated, and subtly corrupted the timeline until eventually his kin broke through or awoke en masse. Everyone's grimmer, edgier, more apocalyptic, since they're living through an apocalypse.
Goliath is the Evilverse version of Ladybug, a very tall fellow with high powered armor who has set himself up as a warlord, turning the west coast into his territory and protecting it from elder gods that attack.
Evilette is Colette's counterpart, who hunts down elder gods and seeks more power to battle them. So there's two examples.
Well at least you know what you like.
Well i mean that's twitter in general, heh.
like a full boiled egg or we talking fried?
same question as
>Evilverse Jack
Considering he isn't a jock in the main world, you probably would guess in this he's probably a big jock dick, wienery enough of his achievements and very uncaring for others, except if they were important for his achievement/winnings.
Appearance?
>Probably mutton chops with a sort of van dyke?
>Suit is probably alot more armored and comes off as some sort of foot-ball-y like suit.
>Has a big and badass looking tech hammer (Something like from halo's gravity hammer combined with the roblox gravity hammer.)
>Throw in a eyepatch just to add in the evil?
Latter, but not exactly? They're more systematically here for a peek of what, or rather who, would've been in that project I wanted to do. Really considered these are twitter/social media stuff, it can be diluted down to:
>Thick af woman
>Thick af woman
>Thick af woman
>Thick af woman
>Hot Buff guy
>Walking horror
>Punching Bag
>Anomaly
>Thick af woman
you know how it goes with stuff like that
cool
Original Character, actually, could have inspirations from those two characters though.
Yours? Or are you just posting random OCs?
Skullgirls fusion? Looks like cerebella combined with filia
He's talking to (you)
>slowly sinks into a crack and disappears
Honestly, it depends on his mood: he might do that, try to offer a rebuttal, say something to the effect of " 'k" and disappear or even something a bit more... rude.
I really enjoy the idea of these two having bants on somewhat equal footing.
>favorite
Tooting my own horn here a bit, but Arthur likes soft-boiled with shit-load of spices.
Throw in a side of rice and it even can be qualified as a real meal!
...A very depressing meal, but a meal nonetheless.
Better than what I fix, most days
Anyway just to save this thread, I wanna ask if anyone here would help a lad out on literature writing? I'm in a sort of a pickle?
See, I'm trying to get myself to make this sort of thing on google docs that describes this project world I wanna do for Cinemaphile and myself. I think it's what one may call a tv bible/pitch bible? Or something like that but not exactly?
May need help, if you can help that would be great! P.S it's that Project 201X thing I wanted to do.
Names I kinda wanted to do was like Project Sandbox and Project Phanes, but they didn't sound good. Advice and opinions would be great
What is it about? Look at your summary and then base your title from there.
And I mean what is it ACTUALLY about, not a board semi-idea.
If you don't even have that much yet then start with a summary, then a bulleted outline, then think up all the cool shit you want to write, then come up with how to get to that cool shit.
That's how I do it anyway.
Oh, well I don't have anything done yet, because I'm just that confused on it.
Also okay then, I mean I think 201X was just made because it had a neutral thing and it was in the year 201X/2008-2010 era.
Best way to put is this: Original Characters/Content meets Crazy Wacky Internet meets somewhat Mark Millar stuff/Ultimate shit (but better) meets...SCP (?)
Pretty much starts out small though, while I don't anything much because I don't seem to know how to do a story thing and all for what goes down in this, like a bible? Idk really right now I'm working on this idea thing involving analog horror to maybe start off this Universe with something of a college made television channel that goes wrong in and out of it.
There's also President Obama, who in this world is sort of better a bit in this world than his actual real life self? Stuff with him and high-tech stuff sort of being suppressed by the Illuminati, who has ties with much bigger folks.
Really it goes into a small thing with a few handful of characters before expanding alot harder and bigger more and more. Idk things grow, idk this is my first time trying to expand this newer version of the project, so apologies.
btw what's a bulleted outline and what's it look like?
The inability to put it into concise words is part of your issue.
Beginning, middle, end. Start with the basics. The fundamentals of storytelling.
Who are your characters?
What are they doing?
Why are the doing it?
Where is it happening?
And, if relevant, when is it happening?
If you can't answer those questions, you don't even have the beginnings of an idea of a story.
How does your favorite /coc/ character like their eggs?
would the creator of billy please come forth and answer this question
Raw.
Meh
Same.
Any GG summer draw ideas?
Eating watermelon, noting if they are bigger or smaller than hers. Something along the lines of:
"Well at least there's something around here bigger than me."
or
"This is just ridiculous!"
Something playing with the idea of her disguising herself as a hula dancer, a coconut bra not fitting right and her thinking about it needing to be a bra made from watermelons
Just melons on the mind after reading
tell me hwacha think, /coc/.
it looks great! just having trouble reading the title
Time's Infinity. It's just a prototype for the title design, wanted it to match his new logo.
>Time, huh?
Ben 10 and Hal Jordan settled their differences and had a kid.
Can you believe me if I tell you that the first ever concept art for him looked like this?
Yes, absolutely. I appreciate the attention paid to making him cute.
That boy wants some of that cleavage
Huh, guess we are done for the week.
decent run, for being content light
Yeah I'll work on my current handful of characters, and potential the world as a whole for a start?
It'll get somewhere for sunday? Anyway see you all then, and thanks for the help.
Bump?
Are there any good topics?
There could be if you want to talk about something.
Gave a bit more thought to Crackdown's abilities:
Arthur can enter his pocket dimension through one oriface and exit through another, but it's more of a "fast travel" thing than something he can reliably do in the heat of the moment Portal-style. Since the "other side" is an absolute illogical clusterfrick to navigate, Arthur prefers to keep close to the initial entry point and pop right back out. With time, however, he would learn that he can memorise specific exit points while inside the dimension and, after retreading his path a couple of times, he'd be able to reliably travel long distances almost instantaneously. Initially he'd be willing to do this only with handful of locations from around the state. He would later on expand to rest of the country and even further beyond, but he'd do it very gradually since:
>being there for prolonged periods of (and I'm using this word very loosely here) time starts bringing him the same kind of discomfort as to normal people, even if it's not nearly as severe
>the pocket dimension works on Warhammer Warp-esque rules when it comes to personal perseption of time and space when he sets off to "uncharted waters" (he doesn't feel that he was there for literally 1000 years upon exit, but it still feels like it was certainly a lot)
>the location of the exit points in the dimension does not correlate to the IRL crack locations (it's more about concetration and knowing what you want rather than actual directions you'd use for navigating conventional space), so he'd essetially be blind-hopping
Thoughts?
I think this is a logical evolution of his abilities with reasonable limitations that would:
>considerably broaden Crackdown's range of operation, which would allow him to do his superheroing while still living in Los Palos without stepping on Marley's toes too often
>add to his Batman-like factor of "oh frick, he's already here"
>serve as a precursor for multiversal travel stuff
*the location of the exit points in the dimension does not correlate to the IRL crack locations (it's more about concentration and knowing what you want rather than actual directions you'd use for navigating conventional space), so blind-hopping could potentially be pretty dangerous
Sorry for wording it so confusingly.
So he can't reliably move between cracks with enough speed to be relevant in a fight, but fast enough to obviate long distance travel, is what I'm gathering. The line about crack locations not correlating suggests to me that the "other side" either has a fixed layout he'd be able to learn with time, or the exact opposite.
Also, something I'm unclear on- is he able to create new cracks? Or does he have to find them? You've mentioned him manually abrading his muscles to promote growth, which would seem to imply he can do it with fine control at a very micro scale.